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for Him and Her

by foxmagic07

person Selece
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My first time reading your story, and I love it! I think you're doing an awesome job! Keep up the great work. ^^ *stuffs a lot of plot bunnies on you* I love how you've put this story together. Nothing like a well-thought out story. I think that the flow is beautiful. I really hope you are able to update soon. Best of luck with writing the next chapter and can't wait to see it. ^^
person Kaoro Tsumi
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't be so nervous about your work, because it's a great one. I've been frenziedly looking for IchiRuki fics for the past two days, since I recently discovered the manga Bleach, and your fic is by far the best I've found. So, don't doubt yourself ! Keep going ^^ ! And good luck. I personally think the last chapter, about the soul society arc, is successful ^^
person tia_blue
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s really god an funny and all that jazz....but for some reason sounds very very VERY familar......ummm, are you writting the events of what acually happens in the anime with more detail, or is this truly original? I love it! but i just wanna know....
person Marya
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I don\'t really know what to write. I just know that i really like this story and I thought that it would be rude not to leave a review. So even if I don\'t have anything really constructive to say I hope that you will write more! ^_^
person corey gorman
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good when the next chapter coming out i mean chapter 5
person Nis-chan
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I really love this fic.
person keitaro+motoko 4ever
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i want to know if rukai comes back or not? your story has me in a bind i want to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



~K+M
person santamaria
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great writing, you keep the personalities of the characters really well!!! Can\'t really offer any constructive criticism as i\'m not a writer myself :P Waiting eagerly for your next chapter. =)
person adri
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories about them. they\'re so cute! keep writing!
person Tenacious D
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t be nervous about posting. Your stuff is great.