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for Body Shock

by frozenkisses

person Anon
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really fantastic chapter! it was very unique and you definitely stayed IC in my opinion. Great! Can\'t wait for more!!
person Tenacious D
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be a chapter with Kon getting the death penalty for doing.... what he did? I really hope so.
person dark_Angel
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow......O.o\" that was one heckuva long lemon.....very sweet too ^^
only one question though...is Ichigo EVER going to find out Kon did Rukia? I kinda feel sorry for Ichigo \'cause he\'s sorta in a bad spot...Rukia thinks he already did it with her, but Ichigo is embarrassed about being with her for the \"first time\"...=P keep updating!!! cant wait to see more ^^
person Mitsuki (not logged in)
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sweet and well written! Everything flows so naturally, they come together very well, and the sex seems so instinctive and natural for them, it all makes the piece very very good! Though I have to say I was surprised with Kon\'s participation, and anxious that that event doesn\'t make anything bad happen later, I actually like that touch and the surprise. I hope everything ends happily, and that you write more soon! Thank you for sharing, and please do continue! I love it and can\'t wait to read more~!
<3 ^^
person Me
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*-----* I can\'t stop reading it!!
person Akemi
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was absolutely gorgeous!! It\'s AWESOME!!!
I love ichixruki SO much T_____________________T
Please!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update as soon as you can!!!
person Lease242
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Amazing write..I don\'t know what else to say...I have to go read it again.
person Lease242
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your a very talented writer. The story comes together seemlessly and your writing seems almost effortless. Once again, wow!
person ablirim
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was totally HOT!! wohahaha.... another great lemon X3 wonder whats going to happen now eh? hehe :D
person Skanky-Hime
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you are a solid writer, and its good to see some bleach fan-fiction out there. I am not exactly thrilled with your choice to have Kon pretend to be Ichigo, but it was your decision to make, and i can only hope you\'re up to the challenge of dealing with the ramifications! =o)