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*WAIL* oh my GOD, you are GOOD. Although I SO want to know how Ichigo\'s gonna react, is he even going to know? is he going to walk in on them? what will happen?!?! dont keep in suspense for too long, else I\'ll wastse away and die. and that wouldn\'t be good. yeah.
Much Love
Eddie

Ok I\'m going to take a quote from SNL here and say to the masses SIMMA DA NAH jeez the natives are restless. Man this was one HOT lemon I\'m still shaking after reading this over and over again. Your use of vocab and pacing and changing of POV\'s (got it right this time) is great. Did I mention that this is a hot lemon? I really like this story twist it\'s very unexpected and I like Kon very much. He\'s a sweet soul who just doesn\'t have his own body, yes Ichigo cares for Rukia but Kon does too. I really like how you had the little laughs and smiles in it that was very sweet, as well as how his thoughts were focused on her. I like that he didn\'t want her to do any of the work even to undress him that was so sexy. Hot lemon! Man this story is charging up to a fevered pace I can\'t wait to see what direction you\'re going to take it in. You are doing a wonderful job I love everything that you have written so far please keep up the good work and try not to let the negative vibes get you down. Remember the fact that they\'re actually taking the time to write a comment mean this story still moved them even though its not in the same way as others. I know that when I don\'t like something I just don\'t say anything at all so all news is good news.

YOU ROCK!!!! WYOOOO WYOOOOO!!!!! HOT LEMON!!!!!WOOOOOO!!!

Hm. I can\'t possibly think of any way you could rectify this for me. Even if Ichigo does walk in, the damage will still be done, Rukia will still be in shock, and to top it off, she\'ll probably be horribly embarrassed about acting the way she did while thinking it was \"Ichigo\" and not \"the stupid plushie.\" And Ichigo will probably be shocked beyond belief because he never expected any sexnite in the first place. Leaving poor Rukia to feel so stupid.

I\'ve always thought Kon was irritating, and now, reading this fic (where Kon\'s actions might very well be something he really might have done) I\'ve come to like him even less.

I suppose you wrote this and knew there would be a storm of uproar and are one of those people who don\'t really care, but I hope you at least try to make this an IchigoxRukia in its truest sense.

Because this story is REAL. FUCKED. UP. right now.

Good chapter, and I\'m impressed with the speed you can write at. Please update soon.

I know this isn\'t a forum, but seriously people. CALM DOWN. ITS JUST FANFICTION!!

I CANT BELIEVE>...RUKIA\"S FIRST TIME WAS WITH KON?! sure i mean he was in ichigo\'s body but as a die-hard rukia/ichigo shipper....i dunno how i feel about it!

but the lemon was written very well! wonderful to read! i just don\'t know how i feel about rukia\'s first tiem being with kon though........

If you keep this Kon/Rukia could you please atleast write an alternate story/ending that is *actually* Ichigo/Rukia like you promised in the beginning?

I can\'t bring myself to keep reading your story with the current \"twist\" as you like to call it, feels like I discovered a treasure chest, opened it, and found that it was filled to the rim with dog shit.

HOLY #@!$%@^!!! THAT WAS SO %@$^!%! GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE LEMON!!! I almost feel aroused now... LOL! THAT WAS JUST SO HELLA GOOD! I cant stop feeling this since of bouncy joy and glee I\'m feeling! CHEERS TO YOUR MASTERPIECE! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE! GOOD LUCK!

Wow, nice lemon, well worth the wait....I can\'t wait to see where you take this from here. Keep the updates coming and don\'t worry about the, \"Kon,\" uproar, as you said you can\'t please everyone. Also, I must of missed the part where you suppossedly promised this to be, exclusively Ichigo and Rukia. I never understood how people get all $&^%*@ wacked out over fan fics, it\'s called fan FICTION for a reason.