rate_review Reviews

Beautifully written. You're one of the most expressive and most understanding authors I've ever seen. You wrote as if you WERE Ichigo and the others. The characters were never out of place, and the characters evolved slowly, but surely in later chapters. "Body Shock" is a fantastic, syncronized piece. Thank you for writing this! THANK YOU!

You've made me an eternal fan.

Fantastic story, very well written. The Imagry and dialouge was fantasticly done and really brought the characters to life.

That said, I hated chap 12. Ichigo is deep down a good person, but he's not a fucking saint.

Anyway, I look forward to seeing more of this story in the future.

I'm surprised no one's mentioned this yet, but I really liked the hints of an Orihime/Ishida/Tatsuki love triangle. I'd love to see a fic where this is further explored...

I love you!! That was extremely well written and extremely hot! I loved the idea of Kon(in Ichigo's body) having sex with Rukia. Another thing I like was how you had Rukia experiment with herself. Only because I can really picture Rukia being curious about it, and adding the affect of her wanting Ichigo put the icing on the cake. <3 Wonderful story!

It was a really great story. You should write a sequel. Tellin more of Ichigo and Rukia, and Ishida and Orihime. jus a suggestion. Thanx for writing this story it was great.

okays! Finally finished it hehe. Can i jsut first of all say wow, yeah definitly wow. I like how you drew it out and didn\'t have everyone screwing eachother right from the begining, aswomage. Ohh and then the fact that it was Kon, so never thought of that idea! I mean wow, and just so you know if i had thought about it i would have dismestied instantly as imposibal. But you did it in a way that i could totaly belive. I mean wraped up in the heat of the moment like that she had no reasion to belive it wasn\'t Ichigo i mean yeah, plus she trusted Kon and probaly never thought he would do somthing like that. Ohh and he didn\'t glomb her which really is the only way she can tell that Kon is Kon ya know. Like when he saved her from that hollow she was all like \"...Ichigo...\" She didn\'t realize it was Kon untill he tried to molest her. So yeah really liked it, other things i liked...eto...ok i liked how you had Kon calling her Nee-San because he always does and it was a really nice touch. How when Ichigo was remembering Kon saving the ants, i liked that you used the Manga version and not the version in the anime were he was saving the kids. The ants really spelled out Kon\'s personalitly that much better. Ohh specing of Kon\'s personalioty, Dead on, absolutly 100% dead on i though. He had the angery winning clingingy bitch and moan aspect but he also had his soft i care about things side, which ofen gets over looked so dead on there. Now the lemons, really reall good! I loved how you did the title \"When life gives you lemons, make lemonade\"! It was really funny i saw that and i was like is that a play on Lemon=sex in the fan fic world so i actully jumped ahead to see and i was like yup i new it very clever i have to say and so fitting lol. It is like ahh this chapter had sex and it is also kinda like Kon making the best of the situatiion yah know Rukia is giving him a lemon so he\'s gonna make that lemonaid hehe! Absolutly exalent writting there, alot of times people are just blaa blaa sex blaa cock blaa ahh more sex bla, but your stuff was really good and the thoughts and stuff intemeixt Awsome Possom. I liked the last lemon when Ichigo was finaly inside her and he was getting all angery and everything and Rukia pulled him back to her and she held him. I was just like awwww soo sweet Warm anf Fuzzy WARM AND FUZZY!!! And i loved Kon worring about if Ichigo was well indoued or not, that was great LOL! I laughed my ass off it was awsome! ANd then when Chad walked in to see them cuddling and just like looked at them and then Ichigo sleeply looked over his shoulder at chad and was oro and chad was just like ok bye and closed the door wiht out a word, i could totaly see that in my head!!! Then i liked how you had an extra little end chapter wrapping things up, i hate it when stories just end, it suckes massavily so yeah goodona for that. My favirt part/line would denitly have to be when Rukia was talking with the girls right and they were all like i thought you said you guys were just friends and then Rukia responds with \"It seems that...He is now more than a friend.\" I could so just see her goffy acting smile and sparklies and sutff. I was like Awsome! Hehe ok that\'s about all i\'ve got to say so yeah, you are absolutly awsome Sensei!!! Please write more yummy bleach stuff so i can read it! Loves you very much and gives you coocikes!!!

This is a great story! I love it! So hot and romantic. It\'s totally going on my Favorites!

ahhh! ^__^ SO GOOD. I\'m such an IchiRuki fangirl and so I was so happy to read this and see them characterized so well. Especially Ichigo. Urahara as a matchmaker...genius. And the lemon scenes were superb. I just wish there had been a little bit more development between Ishida and Orihime, but this story was about Ichigo and Rukia, so it makes sense.

*clap clap* I applaud you.

I thought this was a great story.

This is SO hot. You should write more IchiRuki lemons, really. This is definetly one of the best lemons out there.

Congratulations, bye!