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I just had to put this on my recomended reading list. This was beautifuly done very in character and quite moving. The lemons were quite hot and I give you props on how you made the style change for the situtation and mood. This is a great read and very emotional but with a happy ending and I\'m glad you did it the way you did. I would be very happy to see you do an Orahime/Ishedia paring. (sorry about my spelling) You give very good motivations to the characters and I liked your lemon style in that Ichigo was all nippy for the last one but Kon was tickely. Very well done you are a great writer:)

This is definitely a nice piece of work. Besides the tasty lemonade, I think you did a very good job with the dialogue between all the characters, not just Rukia and Ichigo. Lemons taste better then there\'s a good deal of plot around them - definitely more fun when you\'re cheering for the protagonists to get together. Nice work!

To say I was pleasently surprized is an understatment I really like the story of bleach and was very impressed about this addition.
jim from md

I have to say, I was surprised at the turn this story took, but I think you handled it very well, so kudos to you. I think that everyone was very well in character, the progressions were smooth, and poor Kon and his unrequited love... The only thing I found a bit odd was that, though it wasn\'t really Rukia\'s fault, I expected Ichigo to take a little more time in turning around, or that he\'d do it more suddenly (if that makes any sense). I think ultimately it was resolved very well, though it was sad to see it end as I\'d love to see a growing Ichigo/Rukia relationship (not sure how far it should be taken, but I\'ll leave that up to the author).
In any case, very well-written, the lemons were smooth, and the rest was very good, nice touches with the friends, Urahara, Chad, and everything. It was great, and I really enjoyed it :)

Very good :D I loved it, the first Bleach lemon I\'ve ever read, and it was great! :) Keep up the good work.

Very well done! Had all the elements of the show and the characters actions were on par with it as well. Definately liked Nee-sans self-curiousity of her body, that was great. Had a good laugh when Kon actually took her virginity but was more please with Ichigo\'s actions to prove himself. Loved every bit of it! Keep up the good work!

Ps. If you know of anyone who is willing to write an ElfenLied fic on the site please let me know, I am hoping to see a fic of this show.

One question, when are you doing a sequel with Orihime and Ishida? This story was awesome! The lemons were hot hot hot. I really got into the fight with the Hollow too, you should write more action sequences, they are at times challanging to write, but worth the effort, and I think you are more than up to the task. You do a good job of keeping the characters \"in character\" for the most part. overall a very enjoyable story,

This is the BEST IchiRuki fanfic ever. You say you won\'t be doing anymore multi-chapter fanfics for a while, but how about some one-shots with this pairing please?

Really fantastic, great work!

the ending was really good, although i didn\'t think kon got what he deserved....
do another fic with inoue/ishida (a one shot or something...) =)
great job! ^^