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for Body Shock

by frozenkisses

person nonengel
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you did a good job with this story, thanks for sharing it
person Suki
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!! it was great and you are a good writer!! *hands writer a cookie* you also help me get out of my writers block thank you!! *hands six more cookies* thanks! it was good keep it up~

Suki XXOO
person abysm
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. When I first read this story, I couldn\'t bring myself to get past the Rukia/Kon part. But, I\'m glad that I came back and finished it. I totally loved the bittersweet ending, and can\'t help but feel a bit of pity for the poor mod soul. Thanks for making such a great story. :)
person Lease242
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. girl, you pulled it off! Bet your glad it\'s finished, you should be proud of this fic. I\'m looking forward to your next story.
person :o
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The author is a woman? No wonder Rukia got all the lovin\'. Sexist.
person ablirim
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah... dat was so HOT!!!
person ablirim
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dat was by far DA BEST NC-17 ichiruki fic i\'ve read!! great job on dis fic, gurl!! hopin and lookin forward to more of your fics!! *glomps* XDDDXDXD toodlez~~ :D
person :(
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rukia got double head, and Ichigo got none, that\'s just plain selfish.
person 1cey
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHY !! NOO !! I WISH IT NEVER ENDED !! I LOVED THIS FIC !! TT.TT WAA !!! TTOTT
well, it was good while it lasted. hopefully, you will write more good bleach fics, or good fics
period ^^. ok. ja ne. ^^
person Blupawz
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful ending.
It wasn\'t one of those sappy endings; it had tension and left the reader thinking.
A thinking-non-sappy ending is a good ending, heh ^.^
I liked the way you wrapped up with each character...

I couldn\'t find anything wrong with this story at all...
One could really relate to everyone\'s position...
All the characters were in character...
It went at an awesome pace...

Yip, a beautifully written story.
I look forward to reading more from you - multichapter or not.

~Blupawz.