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for Body Shock

by frozenkisses

person blacky
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. Totally jealous of your skills. This lookin\' hella good.
person blacky
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SHeesh. You really droned on and on in this chapter. You need to cut off redundant paragraphs.
person Lease242
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm...I see evidence of a split personality above me, lol. I just can\'t see why so many people can\'t empathize with poor Kon in this situation. Once again, well done. Anxiously awaiting the finale!!!
person fairyskye
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! I\'m totally in love with this story. I hope you update soon and I hope there is some Uryuu/Orihime romance too!
person ablirim
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!! wonder wat urahara\'s gonna do...
person fnw
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still don\'t think Kon was right - I mean, had the real Ichigo been in Kon\'s place that first night, I\'m sure he would\'ve gone for it. And it was big of Kon to react that way against Ichigo. I don\'t think he\'s repented enough. But whatever. At least this story\'s cleaned up...with the PROPER pairing on the \"home stretch,\" as you call it. Cheers.
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAH!!! the end is near! the end is near! I feel like crying....
much love
eddie
person VJ
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is an amazing bleach fic, i love it! Keep up the great work!
person nonengel
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the last couple chapters.... the way the discovery was handled has bene excellent. you character interactions which were great to start with have only been getting better.
person adri
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* update SOON!!!