rate_review Reviews

You write the Chad/Ichigo friendship beautifully. And I\'m glad that Kon apologized but also stood up for himself. I mean, come on, he isn\'t evil. I think you are doing a good job of showing all the perspectives on a complicated and dramatic event.

DAMN!!!! That story was great!!! I don\'t even know the right words to describe it... All the scenes and inbetweeners until the lemons work out so perfectly!!! Continue writing, please!!!!

.................how could you leave us hanging, oh cliff-hanging author of doom?
i think i will also cry in a corner.
much love
eddie

I love the hella out of this great story you\'re writing this so very well:) I\'m enjoying the side Orahime romance and Kon\'s internal thoughts I\'ve always enjoyed his character.

I really liked this chapter! It was cool how you shifted from each person\'s view, although it was a bit confusing at first until you got used to it. Also, it seemed like some of the character paragraphs were not really that important to the actual plot. Don\'t get me wrong, they were awesome, but.. well, I\'m not sure how to put it. Also, it set up some more loose ends and questions before the main one (what\'s going to happen with Ichigo, Rukia and Kon) was answered. Looking forward to see how everything gets resolved!

poor rukia... T_T update please~

This is really a fantastic story... I\'ve been lax on reviewing (bad me), but I just want to say that I truly enjoy the little twists and turns you have put into this - including the whole Kon fiasco. I do not envy any of thier positions right now, and truth be told, I feel a bit sorry for Kon who is so very much like a child in a lot of ways that there couldn\'t have been any way he would have been able to understand exactly how much strife he would cause by his actions beforehand.

Just the right bit of angst here while keeping all of them in character. Thank you for writing this. Oh, and btw, I love the little orihime/ishida snippets too!

--julie

This is actually... really good. Colour me amazed to find a fic of actual quality here on aff. Can\'t wait to see how it\'s all resolved, and please do keep up the Ishi/Hime hints, I love them together! Thanks so much for a really enjoyable read :)

Nice chapter...lots of deep reflection going on. I can\'t wait to see how things play out when there is another Kon/Rukia/Ichigo interaction. Or any two of them meeting. It is nice to see Chad get some play. He seems like a really good friend to Ichigo in the show and in your writing. His reaction should be stoically entertaining.

YEA...update!!!!! Nicely done, you definitely got the characters down!