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for Body Shock

by frozenkisses

person kpxiceboi
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. lucky me, you updated quickly ^^ awesome chap. can\'t wait to see what\'s in store for the three of them ^^.
person mr1ce
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, just read this. awesome story. very dramatic. ichigo -.-;; overreacting i think. poor kon. i like kon. well, i cant read what happens next.
person Akemi
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oww nooooooooo poor Rukia!! and poor Ichi T_T
I hate kon so much -_-
Please!!! Update as soon as you can!!! *----*
person alaska
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! This story is so-well writted and the plot is great! I read a lot of fanfiction and this is by far the best fanfiction story I have ever read. You must update this story soon!!!!!!!!

I love the way you intergrated the lemon scenes in with the regular story. It shows your story as being more of a mature outlook on how Ichigo and Rukia\'s relationship would progress from them being just friends to the point in which they would want to express their feelings of love in a sexual way. I also like the fact that you used Kon to help them further the relationship and reach the point that they could actually have deeper, more meaningful feelings for each other. The plot twist with at the end of the last chapter was really good as to leave me on the edge. I am really wanting to know how this will affect them now. Any info. as to when you will update this will appreciated by not just me but all readers of this story.
person fnw
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Ichigo is such a drama queen. ;-p
Anyway....good chapter for the explaining bit....I\'d like to see where their relationship will go from this.
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It helps readers have a different view of the relationship between Ichigo and Rukia. I just hope that BLEACH would eventually show that they do love each other. -coughcough- u_u;
person JWM
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty sad, but good. Your writing style really is top rate.Please keep going with this fic.
person Sammei
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can\'t believe they finally found out! To tell you the truth, I wasn\'t really sure how I thought Ichigo and Rukia \"should\" act, but you did it very well and convincingly. Poor Rukia! Poor Ichigo! Even poor Kon, though he deserved it! I absolutely *cannot* wait for you to update again! Looking forward to seeing how things get resolved. ^^
person Lease242
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Your one helluva writer, everyone is so in character....I\'m starting to mix in your story with the actual episodes. lol ...even with all the build up...this chapter was perfect. When Ichigo asked her, \"Did you like it?\" I could feel his pain. Wow....can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person ablirim
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ZOMFG!!! he found out!!! UPADTE PLEASE!!! XD