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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers... In reading this, I felt like I was watching an episode of Bleach, but in prose! :)
Very in character, incredibly well versed and, of course, a VERY good build up in tension; not the usual \"Wam-Bam-Tank-Yew-Ma\'Am\".
And I gotta say \"Wow\" about the protrayal of Inoue Orihime (CHAN!! =^_^=), reading her, I felt like melting into that little puddle of goo that she managed to do in the Anime with her naivette and innocence. But, now, with the injection of catty playfulness... Ho boy, can\'t wait for the next installment!
Something with actual sustanance here folks! Not a PWP! :D
Very in character, incredibly well versed and, of course, a VERY good build up in tension; not the usual \"Wam-Bam-Tank-Yew-Ma\'Am\".
And I gotta say \"Wow\" about the protrayal of Inoue Orihime (CHAN!! =^_^=), reading her, I felt like melting into that little puddle of goo that she managed to do in the Anime with her naivette and innocence. But, now, with the injection of catty playfulness... Ho boy, can\'t wait for the next installment!
Something with actual sustanance here folks! Not a PWP! :D
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nicely done! And thank you for writing this so that I don\'t have to try to. X D (It\'s nice to know I\'m not the only one who thought of this possibility, after watching the episodes in question.)
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, the first Bleach fic you\'ve written and the first one I\'ve watched! I even just finished episodes 28 and 29 directly beforehand. I thought the way they transitioned into a physical relationship was very believable and I find them to be very much in character. Would things have gone that far? Mmm....well, maybe. Neither character is really that flushed out in the series, and they are each full of surprises everytime they are on screen, so why the heck not!?
I liked the little details such as her liking his glasses and the way that impressed him. I also loved the way she babbled on. You were definitely able to show how endearing she is as a character and how complex Ishida is with his confidence, and awkwardness and sweetness. Well done!
I liked the little details such as her liking his glasses and the way that impressed him. I also loved the way she babbled on. You were definitely able to show how endearing she is as a character and how complex Ishida is with his confidence, and awkwardness and sweetness. Well done!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no...that\'s the end? why why why!? Great story you\'ve got going on! I love Ishida/Orihime and you really captured them perfectly while filling in the blanks in a realistic way. The progress of their physical and emotional relationship is slow and gentle and HOT. Love it! Please update soon!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sweet! ou got the characters right, their characteristics. hope you have a continuation for this.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and Very very realistic. I thought the same thing after I saw that eppie. I love it. write some more Bleach fics! Your work is GREAT!
Much Love
Eddie
Much Love
Eddie
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and Very very realistic. I thought the same thing after I saw that eppie. I love it. write some more Bleach fics! Your work is GREAT!
Much Love
Eddie
Much Love
Eddie
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was so cute I really liked it the hime-speak and the glasses and the seaweed flavored lollypop just too cute and sweet:)
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great fic, I was wondering when someone would finally make an inoe/ishida fic and im very glad you did.
You had the characters down pat, hime-speak haha.
I look forward to more, keep up the good work!
You had the characters down pat, hime-speak haha.
I look forward to more, keep up the good work!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool enough fic. Thank you for making one with Orihime in it.