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^^ I love this... story, whatever you call it, series of one-shots. They\'re so cute and passionate and... damn it just makes me like this pairing even more. I congratulate you on your amazingly awesome job with what you have so far, and humbly beg for more. Please?

Hey there! Still here! Still reading! Still enjoying! (Still commenting!) Keep going! You make your readers happier people! And happier people make the world a better place!

omg great job guys (=^_^=) this story rocks, i really cant think of anything bad about the story...the storyline is good, the characters are not OCed and the loving is good too *grin* anyhooz keep up the good work hope you update soon ^.^

omg! wow, i absolutely looooooovvvveeee your stories!!!! so good! i\'m happy that there\'s finally a good bleach yaoi out here that i can get addicted to! but you must continue this story please~ i think it would be cute read how ichigo teaches ishida to swim.. lol i don\'t even care about a lemon! just reading ichigo teaching ishida to swim would be enough :P please keep up the good work and update asap.

You have no idea how happy I am at how fast you guys are updating this! Usually the stories I like to follow only get updated once in a blue moon... and I\'m being totally serious about this. On top of that, this story is not only providing us with beautifully written lemons, but it is also giving us a slowly building romance... while keeping true to the original characters\' personalities. Kudos to you! I look forward to reading the next chapter.

One little typo though: when Ichigo says he doesn\'t want to lose what he has with Ishida near the end... you guys put \"loose\" instead of \"lose.\" Other than that, I didn\'t notice anything out of place. Amazing work! Keep it up!

Anytype of yaoi Bleach fic are REALLY RARE.. So a big thankyou and hug for autor/authors to deliver so well and even with my Bleach OTP!! THANK YOU!! ^.^

Waaaaah! I must apologize for increasing your hit count by quite a bit, but every time I have had to try and REVIEW, AFF.net has crashed on me, saying the server is down. (T_T) But yes, I wanted to let you know that I really do like what you are doing with this and to please, PLEASE continue! From the top of my head, I DO remember a typo somewhere... a little more than half-way down, in chapter two. I think you used \"they\'re\" when it was supposed to be \"their\"... or something like that. I don\'t remember exactly, but it was something to that effect. But yes, other than that, I like how you keep the characters so IN character. That\'s what makes the Ichigo/Ishida coupling so inticing... the rivalry, the angst, the similarities b/w the two... but yes, PLEASE keep up writing. I await the next chapter. Omachishite orimasu.

I like the fact that the story sofar could read as either a series of one-peices or as a plot-in-development. It would be wonderful to see the gradual progression between Ichigo and Ishida. I look foward to part 3!!

I love it! XD

Hey there. Just a reader, not an author, and truth be told, I almost never comment. But your plight just sounded so sympathy-worthy. Just to possibly give you an idea, I\'m sure there are plenty like me that read tons but never comment. Sometimes it\'s too late at night and we\'re tired. Sometimed We just can\'t be bothered. Sometimes we want to save our comments for the stories we read that are truly exceptional. But just because a fic isn\'t lengthy and clever and poetically written doesn\'t mean that we didn\'t have oodles of fun reading it. So I\'m commenting now, to tell you that your fic here is definitely fun, and a pleasure to read. First of all, it\'s always nice when the author uses correct grammar and spelling. (You have *no* idea.) And second, it\'s my personal preference to read stories where the characters I like are kept in character and the sequence of events is logical and sounds possible. Either do it that way, or make it completely AU and throw everything but the physical description out the window, I say. Yours meets both thses criteria and is a healthy, satisfying length to boot. A nicely developed time frame. Bravo. WRITE MORE. And I hope this comment spurs thy inspiration.