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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love this pairing and love the fact that they actually like each other! So... when does Ishida gets a turn at top? Wouldn\'t it be fun to convince Ichigo...
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two, even hotter than its predecessor! ^_^ I saw one instance of \"they\'re\" that should have been a \"their\", but if there were any other typos in this segment. I was far too distracted to notice them. **fans self** Very nicely done, and thank you.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAY! I love this story. I\'ve always wanted to read a good Ichigo/Ishida story that was sexy but with passion and love, but this...this is AWESOME! I look forward to your next chapter. You have inspired me to write my own story but that\'s later down the road. Anyways thanks for entertaining me!
KH
KH
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was GOOD. XD I have nothing much to say except I hope there\'s more coming.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this little story was well written. Good spelling/grammar (thank god) and had a good pace to it. I too know how hard it is to get reviews. generally, I\'ll review if the story was good and I liked it. This was both. Don\'t get discouraged and as an author buddy recently told me...\"write what you wanna write and don\'t let others dictate what you produce\". Should you continue with this great. If not, then it was a nice piece of smut to read on a hot summer day.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GOD. That was awesome, Kit and Ceci!!!!!!!!!(sry \'bout the nicknames, they just seemed to cute not to use)
I am soooooo glad that you guys updated!!!!!!! I have no complaints, and I can be pretty nit-picky!!
It\'s wonderful to find authors who actually proofread!!!
Anyway, keep up the great work!!! *cough*please continue *cough*
LOVE YA GUYS!!!!!!!! MWAH MWAH!!!!
Kai
I am soooooo glad that you guys updated!!!!!!! I have no complaints, and I can be pretty nit-picky!!
It\'s wonderful to find authors who actually proofread!!!
Anyway, keep up the great work!!! *cough*please continue *cough*
LOVE YA GUYS!!!!!!!! MWAH MWAH!!!!
Kai
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! First Spartan Ninjas and now this!!!!!!
You two are gonna spoil me!!!! I love how you keep them in character, and you even remembered how much
Uryu hates buttons! *giggles* Button Nazi.....deranged seamstress......heheheheheheh......
LOVE YA BOTH!!!!!! MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!!!!!! XOYXOYXOYXOYXOYXOY
Kai
You two are gonna spoil me!!!! I love how you keep them in character, and you even remembered how much
Uryu hates buttons! *giggles* Button Nazi.....deranged seamstress......heheheheheheh......
LOVE YA BOTH!!!!!! MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!!!!!! XOYXOYXOYXOYXOYXOY
Kai
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drool* omg, this is the kind of story that i\'ve been waiting for.. so hot!!! more please then ^_^ and keep up the good work!
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*lol* You did it! This fic made my day. Hehe, seme!Ichigo trying not to loose his position to creepy, manipulative Ishida... that just like those two. Although I wonder how Ichigo got this good in multitasking while having sex ;-). Please update soon! (I know you want more reviews, but please think of us readers, too. For indepth feedback posting in an lj community might be the better way.)
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! Shinigami is spelled with one n though, not two. ^^
I appreciate that you want to encourage feedback, but personally? Any time I see someone withholding chapters for reviews, it not only makes me LESS likely to review, but often makes me stop reading the story altogether. Just sayin\'.
I appreciate that you want to encourage feedback, but personally? Any time I see someone withholding chapters for reviews, it not only makes me LESS likely to review, but often makes me stop reading the story altogether. Just sayin\'.