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Aww! How wonderful. I loved it! :D Thanks!

A wonderful story. Good mix of hottness and storyline. I was really into it right through the end. Bravo, please write more! It's hard to find stories this good in this pairing. Thank you.

I love your story. And you\'re right, why write something if no one is going to read it.... I am only on the second chapter right now....so I hope by the time I get to the last chapter you will have completed the plot....I really want to know how much this love they share will grow.

Don\'t mean to put you down, but the more I read this story the more the grammar bugs me (Not so sure exactly what it is some times, some of it is just word order or ussage). It is very obvious that you are creative, but you have a problem with using the same words and phrases over and over again. About the grammar issues....its not bad...and most people probably wouldn\'t notice it...but it throws a wrench in the flow of the story...if, again...they notice it. I\'ve a jones for good grammar ~~ Don\'t mind me, I\'m not perfect when it comes to spelling and grammar either.

that was some seriously good smut. you had the characters down, and I liked what you did with finding Kon a body and all. very well written, clear, and descriptive to a fault. Thank you for writing this!

What a great story! I really don't have any criticism of it at all, I thought it was fantastic! Funny, sweet, I loved it all! And adding Kon and his body switch was great! I say Well Done! And I will definitely be checking on your other stories, because I also love Naruto! But I am eagerly waiting for your next Bleach story! Thanks!

What a great story! I really don't have any criticism of it at all, I thought it was fantastic! Funny, sweet, I loved it all! And adding Kon and his body switch was great! I say Well Done! And I will definitely be checking on your other stories, because I also love Naruto! But I am eagerly waiting for your next Bleach story! Thanks!

What a great story! I really don't have any criticism of it at all, I thought it was fantastic! Funny, sweet, I loved it all! And adding Kon and his body switch was great! I say Well Done! And I will definitely be checking on your other stories, because I also love Naruto! But I am eagerly waiting for your next Bleach story! Thanks!

What a great story! I really don't have any criticism of it at all, I thought it was fantastic! Funny, sweet, I loved it all! And adding Kon and his body switch was great! I say Well Done! And I will definitely be checking on your other stories, because I also love Naruto! But I am eagerly waiting for your next Bleach story! Thanks!

THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!! I'm one of those evil people who don't review everything they read but I laughed so much reading your stories and eventhough I've only read volume one of Bleach your stories have made me fall totally in love with the characters. Yes I know the graphic novel probably wont be as yaoi as I want (if at all), but I'll just have to read more of your stories to get my yaoi fix. lol *wink* Thanks again.