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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...This fic is love... I love the interaction between ichi and Ishi *giggle* and the way Hideki reacted to his new Niisan.. I wish there was another chappie though...
and SHAME SHAME On the people who didn't review. If someone has time to tell you they dont appreciated withholding a fic as review hostage them they have time to review don't they? people need to show more appreciation for fics ;_;
and SHAME SHAME On the people who didn't review. If someone has time to tell you they dont appreciated withholding a fic as review hostage them they have time to review don't they? people need to show more appreciation for fics ;_;
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Not a lot of plot, but I don't think that plot is really the point of this series, right?^^ On another note, I'm really glad that the mechanics and grammar are all pretty much correct. You are fantastic writers, and I don't mean just this story...I enjoy many of your long fics as well.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's nothing more annoying and frustrating to an author than watching the hit counter go and up and and seeing the reviews go...nowhere. Perhaps it's something that only an artist of any kind can understand, as well as devoted fans. Well, I know the pain and I always review! ^^ Why take the time to read the story and not let them know how much you enjoy it?? I love this story! It's my favorite Bleach fic ever. I loved it to begin with, but bringing Kon into it was like an inexpected treat. I loved all of it. Every steamy sex scene to every playful banter between Ichigo and Ishida! It's awesome when you find a fic that's so good, and also IC. I'll have to go and check your other stories now...AND REVIEW THEM! ^^
~Sephy J
~Sephy J
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY! YEAH! I love this story so far! I love Ichigo/Ishida stories..ichigo on top of course ^_*
you want feedback! this was very good and the characters where all in character i believe! i love how you write it and you should add some DRAMA and ANGST!!! YEAH ^_^
like Ishida is kidnapped by Kuchiki Byakuya (rukia's evil MEAN brother) and then ICHIGO has to go and rescue him or something! i like stuff like that...but this story is sooo GOOD!!!
i am sad because I have never seen a Hanatorou story before...i think hanatorou will be cute with Kuchiki Byakuya. i have never seen a story on it...so if you want to be the first
ALSO, i really love your naruto fics..ooh that kakashi/iruka story
but yes! i loved this story..LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!
please write more DO NOT GIVE UP everytime i read one of your stories i will REVIEW And tell you how cool they are and how i enjoy them.so mUch ^_^
i look forword to your future stories..^_^
thank you for giving up your time and writing such splendid stories..
you want feedback! this was very good and the characters where all in character i believe! i love how you write it and you should add some DRAMA and ANGST!!! YEAH ^_^
like Ishida is kidnapped by Kuchiki Byakuya (rukia's evil MEAN brother) and then ICHIGO has to go and rescue him or something! i like stuff like that...but this story is sooo GOOD!!!
i am sad because I have never seen a Hanatorou story before...i think hanatorou will be cute with Kuchiki Byakuya. i have never seen a story on it...so if you want to be the first
ALSO, i really love your naruto fics..ooh that kakashi/iruka story
but yes! i loved this story..LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!
please write more DO NOT GIVE UP everytime i read one of your stories i will REVIEW And tell you how cool they are and how i enjoy them.so mUch ^_^
i look forword to your future stories..^_^
thank you for giving up your time and writing such splendid stories..
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That had to be one of the best stories I've ever read with the Ichigo/Ishida pairing. I like how you threw Kon into the mix too. He honestly doesn't get enough love. I appreciated the fact that you didn't take them out of their original personalities really either. I don't think I would have liked it as much if you made them OOC. I mean, there were points where they did seem OOC a bit (in my opinion), but it wasn't too OOC nor was it very often that it occurred. Keep up the great work!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Neehehehehehehehehheehehehhehhehehehehe ^_^ hehehe
I like it. And not just because it’s incredibly hot ^_^.... although chapter 5 disturbed me o.O I'm sorry but the entire time I hade a mental picture of the doll o.O
^_^ although I like the story and think there is some talent in the writing, you should watch your grammar, and how you word things to avoid confusion. Other than that practice your writing style and find a plot and your completely good to go (although in this case plot-less is JUST as yummy) ^_^
I like it. And not just because it’s incredibly hot ^_^.... although chapter 5 disturbed me o.O I'm sorry but the entire time I hade a mental picture of the doll o.O
^_^ although I like the story and think there is some talent in the writing, you should watch your grammar, and how you word things to avoid confusion. Other than that practice your writing style and find a plot and your completely good to go (although in this case plot-less is JUST as yummy) ^_^
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Each chapter had something new to it and each lemon was very interesting to read. Keep up the good work!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeay! I like Kon, I\'m so glad to see him with his own body.
Even though I\'m a Rukia/Ichigo supporter at heart you have written the entire story well and belivably.
Even though I\'m a Rukia/Ichigo supporter at heart you have written the entire story well and belivably.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...that was really cute ^_^ i loved it a lot
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing piece of writing! I adore this pairing, and unfortunately there aren\'t enough stories about them out there, and certainly not of this quality. I was also very pleased to be rewarded with your having them switch positions in chapter 4. I personally don\'t see Ishida as particularly uke, so that was very fun to discover as I kept reading. Hot sex, very in-character dialog, just all sorts of fun! There was a lot of care put into this arc of stories and it really shows. Thanks for sharing!