rate_review Reviews

OMG. This was just fantastic! Not only did you pitch Ishida and Ichigo togehter but you managed to convincingly squeeze in Kon too? I already love your stories from Naruto, but this just about blows me away. WOW! I think you guys did GREAT with the two teen\'s portrayal. Kon\'s was right on the mark too. Instead of dragging on with what could have been a slow moving story, you made it fast paced and a pleasure to read. I loved the Ishida Ichigo pairing but you\'ve really just rubbed in my face how good they really are together and with Kon, it just gets better! I am SO glad you guys decided to expand your writing into other Anime\'s, especially BLEACH since the Ishida and Ichigo pairing is a bit under represented. You go girls! Nicely done!

Great fic! Thanks for sharing. *much love*

Hey rthere!
I jsut finished reading the palytime miniseries from start to finish! And let\'s jstu say I liekd what I read ^.~ THe realationships were well thought out, charaters well portrayed, and the sex was steam. My only regret was here was not more *ppout* I\'d love to see a -longer- stroy abotu that trio... it\'s not often you see a threesome protrayed this well!! One last hting, I love how you made the efection and love very subtle, it was a great way to make thigns romantic without being horridly cliche and predictable.. for once it\'s not being shoved inthe face btu rather hinted at, ^.~ Us smart readers can put 2 and 2 together *sniggers*
Anyeays, I\'ll be keeping an eye on you guys. and I\'m looknig forward to mroe yummy bleachy acttion!
I read in one of the author\'s notes that you do Naruto fiction too o.o is it jstu sasunaru or other pairings too?

I\'ve commented before, but I have to again. This story is so good, I\'ve come back to read it several times. And linked to all my friends. And told them how there\'s this story that has Ichigo x Ishida x Kon in Ichigo\'s body, and they make it work SO WELL.

Please write more! I love your take on Ichigo and Ishida relationship!

i liked the story
a lot (not into 3 ways) but who cares!!!
sorry that i didn\'t review up till now
but i don\'t like reviewing till the end

Sorry bout that

N e wayz your(s) story Rocks

Well...all I can say is WOW. I know that you are asking for constructive critisicm, but I feel that there is none to give, since this collection is truly phenominal! You write very steamy lemons and great plot and dialogue as well - a scary combination - you challenge other authors (including me) to better themselves.

Rukia and Ichigo\'s conversation at the end of vacation made me laugh out loud, Ichigo\'s statement of \"this is the only button that Ishida doesn\'t hate\" was wonderful, and - HOLY CRAP - you got Ichigo to be uke in a believeable way!

Your inclusion of Kon had me raising an eyebrow at first but then you wove this beautiful story around it, giving me a new view on Kon. Your threesomes are refreshingly original and, for lack of a better word - HAWT.

This is, hands down, the best story in the Bleach fandom, whatever you do, don\'t stop writing! :goes to mop brain up off keyboard:

That was a wonderful ending. I cant wait to read whatever else you guys put out. I think I\'ve read everything up to this point. I love your writing and I\'m a huge fan. So....I hope you update something soon. Have a good day/night/evening/afternoon/ whatever it is where you are when you read this!^^

Still loving this - did notice one minor error I have to comment on, though. The device that clamps tightly is a \"vise\"; \"vice\" is the sort of wonderfully naughty activity the boys are indulging in. ~,^ (Yeah, yeah, I\'m a Princess of Word Priss, what can I say. The difference between \"loose pants\" and \"lose pants\" has been known to make me froth at the mouth. *sweatdrop*)

Having gotten that out of my system - I\'ll be watching for your next Bleach fic!

What a world you created! The description of every scene was so full, I could really see where they were (and, um, what they were doing ^^; ) I love how Ichigo and Ishida still fight, even when in the middle of foreplay, it made them seem \'in character\', you know? Besides it being a fanfic and yaoi, no one was OOC at all.

Kon\'s new body does seem to completely fit him. And Ichigo X Ishida X Ichigo (kon) is probably the hottest image ever.

Constructively, the only things I could find were a few misspellings (I can\'t even remember where they were now). And Ichigo had *pop*! O.O It took me a minute for my southern brain to figure out it was soda.

N o reveiws for such boom ficcage!Shame people.I love the way you describe their physical responces to each other,its hot.Their fumbling towards intimacy is sweet but not mushy,thank kamasama.The places and situations you put them in without losing the care with fore mentioned detail is the most unique and very appreichiated part.Quality all the way.I am happy happy happy.Plus this is my fav pair for this series so happy ect.Thank You sooooo much.If you want a better group of readers come to Naruto and write some Uchihacest,Itachi/Sasuke (they can be flipped too)or Orochimaru/Sasuke, you will be whorshiped for this level of writing.Grins.Yup Yup.