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person sorviball
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m so sad that this is over!!! Maybe you guys can randomly post one-shots as a treat for those who are refusing to believe that this series is over. honestly, i was a little skeptical about how the threesome would work out but you guys definitely pulled it off well. I think the dynamic between the 3 characters is great. It was so sweet to let Kon have his own body and his own life. I loved Hideki\'s character and how normal Kon\'s family was. It was also great that they all \"came out.\" Of course, the lemon was really hot. Too bad Ishida didn\'t get to top Ichigo again, but Kon needed his time to shine. I think you guys did a good job giving Kon his own personality and his own role to play within the relationship. He was\'t just a third addition to the couple, but he really seemed like he belonged. You also did a great job balancing out Ichigo\'s loving side, and his sarcastic side. Honestly, all the characterizations were wonderful and on the spot. You guys did a wonderful job. Keep up the great work in all your future fics. If people weren\'t a fan of you writing before, then they definitely will be now.
person Ryu_chan
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luuuuuuuuved this fic!!!!!!!!!! o*_*o
i luved the pairings and specially the situations xD
oh lord!this stories were TOO DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!!!! xD
hahahaha
you\'re a great writter ^^
i admit...i cried reading the last 2 chapters ;__;
luv happy ends ^^
luved your fic!
hope you write more fics like this :P
congrats!
person Mercedes
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God damn. O.o O.O o.O *dies, drowning in a puddle of drool*
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*is revived*

I swear, NONE of the fic authors I read can write smut scenes like you two ladies can.Seriously, you never forget anything; their reactions are imperfect and frenzied and exactly in character given the situation. *purrs happily* I SO needed to find a good smut like this, it\'s been too long since I read something with substance and enough erotica to make me practically melt out of my seat because of the hotness. Between this fic and \"Spartan Ninjas\", you two are officially the queens of smut in my mind. ^.^
person Mercedes
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter2!

*whimpers and fans herself*

Beach sex! Yay! I realy do like how the characters are developing in this fic and you\'re so careful with the details. Their surroundings, their habitual gestures, speech patterns, all very well written. *purrs* So happy... I love this fic...
person Mercedes
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3!

*wipes up drool* It just keeps getting better. Wow... It boggles the mind how you\'re able to write these scenes with such a mix of emotions!
person Mercedes
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 - Go, Ishida-kun! ^.^

While I\'ve never had the stomach for heavy BDSM, the occassional tying up is always a plus. ^.~ Again, it\'s the little details that get me, intellectually. Example, how Ishida had to leave Ichigo\'s boxers hanging off of one ankle because he didn\'t want to rip them off. *L*
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!1111one! *fangirl-squeals* THREESOME! My fatal weakness... The proposal and their different personalities and ways of approaching things mixing... and all touching... and under and--and-- *whimpers and melts into a blithering puddle*

And with Kon! Such an unexpected twist! I seriously thought this fic was completely Ichigo/Ishida, I would have never even had thought of bringing Kon in! Though, it makes sense in the way that Ishida gets to full-fill a fantasy of having two \"Ichigo\'s\" making love to him. =^.^=

*purrr* Sweet threesome cuddling, too... Ah... I\'m in heaven...
person Mercedes
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6!

BTW, the previous comment that starts with \"OMG!!!!!1111one! *fangirl-squeals*\" is mine about chapter 5. ^.^;;; I was too overwhelmed. *LOL*

Wow... after all that near-pointless smut, you give us plot! Whee! I knew there were more reasons I like your fics, other than the excellent writing style, god characterzation, and attention to detail. I so want to see a picture of Kon\'s new body!

While I adore all the sweetness between the three of them and I like the way you finally gave Kon his own body, there were a few little details that struck me as odd. Mostly they had to do with when you talked about anything concerning Hollow-hunting. The biggest thing was the near-casual handing out the Spirit Phones. I always thought things like that would be a little harder to come by. Some how, the whole thing smacks of Scooby-Gang-ala-\"Buffy The Vampire Slayer\". HOWEVER, you did say it was an AU, so I\'ll forgive it. Besides, the fact that you have Ishida alive, well, and still a functioning Quincy gives me hope for what\'s going to happen in episode 45+ of the anime. ^.^

This was such a wonderful fic series... thank you soooooooo much for writing and posting it! I have been cravin a fic like this for ages and the fact that it was six, LONG chapters of smutty, detail-thick, imagry-soaked goodness just made it even better.

I can\'t wait to read what you come out with next! *camps on your author pages*
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure how I missed his series, but I love it. It\'s fun and very much in keeping with the characters, all of them. Thanks for sharing!
person sorviball
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this was AWESOME!! hehe, i loved the threesome with kon, it was just a really great idea. you guys did a great job keeping track of who was doing what and in what position. i wasn\'t ever confused or wondering what the hell happened to ichigo\'s hand. ::sigh:: lucky ishida, getting two ichigos. i must say the whole thing was all very sexy while still maintaining the level of humor that you guys always have in your other fics. i have no real criticisms...it was all just too yummy. i think i\'m about to go reread it! what i loved about your portrayal of ishida is that you manage to make him sexy without covering up any of his quirks. as always, ichigo was perfectly pushy and impatient. oh, the only thing that struck as odd was the sudden shift after they were all done. the transition getting to the shower was a little shaky, and i can\'t really pinpoint why so it probably wasn\'t a big deal. i just thought it was sudden, but that\'s just me and i was probably just sad that the lemon was over. i\'m SOOO looking forward to the next installment. more lemony goodness from our favorite couple/trio. keep up the great work!