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person K
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just...HOT! I actually liked the little 3-some part! *blushes* You\'re not planning to kill someone and use that body, are you? @_@

Hee, ok, that was a dumb question. Anyways, I DEFINITELY can\'t wait to read the next chapter. ^_____^
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww. that was sweet. i absolutely loved the idea of giving kon his own body. i swear your writing gets better everytime i read something by you guys. keep up the great work. always looking foward to your next update. ^__^
person ayachan
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think ishida should get tied up so ichigo can have his fun kinky way with him
person Pam
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
^.^ sweet, funny, makes sense, its interesting, they are in character, just great!
^.^
I´ve let reviews before but I dont remember wich email I used XD
person Pam ( Michiru)
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I remembered! I used Michiru as a username and the same email XD

I liked this one a lot too! :3
I was expecting it too, XD, Ishida needed top too XD
person sorviball
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was going to leave you guys four different reviews since i think that you definitely deserve them, but i couldn\'t \'get myself to stop reading so i\'ll just leave you one fatty one. hm, first things first. i think you guys have a really good grasp on the dynamic between the two characters, especially ichigo. i love the way you write his inner monologues while describing how nonchalant he tries to be. the couples\' constant jibes at each other are very well written. i especially liked the third chapter when they finally discuss what they are to each other. i think it was very well done in that it wasn\'t overly mushy. i don\'t feel that either of them would have really wanted to express their deepest emotions. my point is, it was very ichigo/ishida-esque. oh, and i loved how rukia knew what they were doing in the shack, and how she teased ichigo about it.

random, but one of the most hilarious moments was in the pool, when ishida thought that ichigo wanted to bottom. i seriously started laughing because i could just imagine how apalled ichigo would be at that idea. on that note, i loved the fourth chapter because i think many authors fail to realize that couples WILL switch roles, even if rarely. i think it\'s realistic that ishida would want to top ichigo once in a while, and i also truly believe that ichigo (or any seme) would be curious as to what it would feel like to be uke. i give big props to authors who are open-minded enough to write a relationship where both partners are both uke and seme. great job, and please continue. i promise to repeatedly posst long reviews like this!
person Forgetful
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I love seme!Ishida. Although, it\'s so obvious he\'s Ichigo\'s bitch. *hugs you guys* Write more?
person Paisley
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I never reviewed before, but I am now.

You\'re story is really good. I\'d like to see more of a relationship between Ichigo and Ishida instead of them just constantly fucking, like in Chapter 3. I dunno, you don\'t have to. I was just suggesting a little more growth into their relationship too.

And I must say I don\'t really like people who base the speed of their work on the amount of reviews. There will be people who just don\'t review, but a lot more people DO read it that don\'t review and I write because I like knowing people read it, reviews don\'t really mean anything to me and they shouldn\'t to you either. You should just love writing because you\'re good and you can write, not if people read it or not. It\'s a plus if they do, but if they don\'t review, it\'s not the end of the world.
person scatterheart
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for another update, i was grinning the whole way through. spectacular writing! im so happy :D
person Goddess of the Void
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yahoi! Kitsue-sama to Tsukineko-sama! Hontou ni arigatou gozaimasu *bows deeply*
I absolutely loved this mini-series; i\'ve been mindlessly meandering through many a fandom looking for some equisitve piece of writing, and I found this *fangirls* ^^ People tell me that somewhat like Ishida being a \"Button Nazi\", I\'m one of the grammar variety. As such, I\'m truly impressed by the level of literary aptitude displayed by your writing. *applauds* This I would say is one of those rare \"I can\'t believe I found such a fucking good fic, and must now tell all my slash-addicted friends\"!fics. Lol.

Keep up the good work!

It\'s definitely appreciated. ^^

Avidly awaiting more, Goddess of the Void.

*continues fangirling*