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for Strawberry Shinigami Hates You

by chibitrillian

person Raiko
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean: thank you for reading and hope you enjoyed??
There\'s suppose to be a \'To Be Continued, after that right?? *desperately panicking here...lol*

Seriously, I LOOOOVED this fic!!! SOooo Yammy!! And damn did I laugh!! I really had a blast reading this, so pleeease..write another chapter!!!*huge kitty eyes*
That would make me infinitely happy!

By the way, you said you thought your title was \'uncool\'...well, I kind of like it. It flashed right away, I thought it was funny since it\'s suppose to be the total opposite \'Quincy Archer Hates You\'. I was curious to see how you\'d turn things up. That\'s probably the reason I actually clicked on your fic in the first place.=^.^= Anyway, my opinion!

Well...one more thing to say: Please keep on going!! *begging you* lol
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki
person Rachel
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ungh hot.
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, very nice! Extremely well-written and evocative, and I love how you keep Ichigo in character. Now, how about a sequel with Ishida doing something similar? X3
person sorviball
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::sigh:: this was so good! i really hope that you make a sequel where imaginary ishida becomes real life. i love your writing style, and the sarcasm within it. it\'s very fitting for this couple, and especially in terms of ichigo\'s character. there were so many parts where it was just hilarious:

\"He scowled at his penis. Stupid organ, having no taste whatsoever in men. You’d think it would at least obey logic some of the time, but no, it had to be a prick about things. The fact that he’d even thought that pun made him scowl even more fiercely at the offending flesh.\"

His inner monologues were just great and so very ichigo. and imaginary ishida was pretty damn hot if you ask me. love it to bits. please write a sequel or something else like this.
person T
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! lol yet oh so sad...Poor Ichigo XD...do you think you could probably attempt a sequel of sorts in maybe Ishida feels the same way and is having the same trouble... and they happily end up together?! because that would be soo awesome! I love this story! ^^
person hColleen
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great! You had so many great little lines! Very awsome story. I do know that there are showers in Japanese bathing rooms, so...don\'t see why he wouldn\'t have a shower (I\'ve seen them in several yaoi manga....)
person Quirk
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I don\'t care if the bath is cannon or not, this is one of the funniest pieces I\'ve ever read hands down. Thanks!
person Ouri
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I enjoyed this greatly. The world needs more well-written smut involving these two; thank you for helping to provide it!
(I would say \"poor Ichigo\", but I\'m afraid it would sound far from sincere... };> )
person Iron Dog
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'Kay, it\'s official. You have a new stalk...er...fan. First I read the YNM fic and find it warms the ole yaoimonger heart (among other things). Then I see this, read it and go \"Damn that was good\". A YNM fic and a Bleach fic both in the same night from the same excellent author...there is a god. You are going to fast become one of my favourite authors and if you keep producing stuff like this, I can see you hitting the high enjoyed by Pax and Scribbles. You will need to write more of course.
person Kai
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heheheh....this was as funny as it was funny!!!
Please write a follow-up where Uryuu and Ichigo hook up!!!!
OOH! and maybe a seme!Uryuu? *gigggles naughtily*
LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!! MWAH!!!!
Kai