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June 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say it's the first story i read on this site and it made such an impression on me, that i just had to make an account to tell you. It's a great story, the pacing is perfect, you managed to convey intimacy of the act without being overly poetic and cryptic, or being explicit and vulgar. 10/10 would, and will, recommend
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooooo cute i love it :P
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed your story.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was your first lemon? It was really very good. Not without taste, and, if I may say so, rather hot.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have got to admit, this is one of the better lemons that I read. You should read one of my first, their horible. As time goes on you will get better, since this is already good you will only get better and better.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story, loved the lemon too.I hope it wasn't a one-shot. I look forward to reading more of your writeing.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute. Sexy. Loved it.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!!! I love this pairing and this story!
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm not a big ichigo/rukia fan but i couldn't take my eyes off that story
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was pretty good