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for Breath

by CrazyAce

person _sigil
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No wonder you\'re proud of it.

Now that has to be one of the sweetest lemons I\'ve ever read. I loved the way nothing about it seemed rushed. I\'m squee. Completely squee.
person alaice
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was so sweet!! thanks for writing a good first bleach fanfiction! ^_^
person Marya
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little mushy but i liked it! ^_^
person whirleeq
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was definately quite good... very hot for a first lemon. Heh - my first lemon was about a paragraph and a half ;). You should feel accomplished! I would love to see more from you in the future... and if you want to watch the bleach anime, you should check out bleach-society.com.
person fairyskye
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was really sweet and I\'m glad this isn\'t a yaoi fic (though I\'m not against it). I\'m just glad there was an Ichigo/Rukia fic. It was a lovely piece. Good job!
person @_@
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoooooaaa!!!!

i like it! its all very sweet and mushy! LOL i need a dose of sweet and mushy every now and then! ^^;;;

eheheheh so in the middle of the night, rukia decides she wants some from ichigo huh> LOL

and i like how ichigo was being so sweet *GOOGLY EYED* even though he ACTS rough around the edges, we all know he\'s a giant softy!