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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read this first at ff.net, but I read it again here. ^^ Just wanted you to know that this is the most profound Ishida Uryuu fics i have seen posted around as of present. ^^ I love the way you characterised them, they were all tied to thir tru personalities in the original series. You are a pretty talented writer. ^^ Keep it up, and I'm hoping for more Ishida-related fics from you! ^_^
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. Poor Ishida. I loooove hiiiim. I can only hope there is more story forthcoming. There is not enough good Bleach slash, especially not the odder pairings. Ergo, you're my hero for the day.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How beautifully written! Good wording, the right amount of detail, the characters stayed in character, and you got them all down right to their thoughts. My only complaint is how brutally long it is. Perhaps next time you could break it up into one or two chapters at suspenseful moments or moments when a transition is occurring?
Other than that, it was a good read. I love how you got everyone\'s thought processes down. I find that hard to do with some characters. Also, might be just me, but it seems as though you paid particular attention to the dialogue of the characters too. Nothing annoys me more than to read fics where the characters do not speak how they actually would. Like, Gin speaking formally instead of his casual drawl. You got their dialogue down as well.
On a personal note, I\'ve been trying to figure out for awhile now how I would go about writing a Unohana x Kenpachi fic and by reading your fic, you gave me an idea. Thankies for that! ^.^
Awaiting the Next Chapter,
~ Dark Saint
Other than that, it was a good read. I love how you got everyone\'s thought processes down. I find that hard to do with some characters. Also, might be just me, but it seems as though you paid particular attention to the dialogue of the characters too. Nothing annoys me more than to read fics where the characters do not speak how they actually would. Like, Gin speaking formally instead of his casual drawl. You got their dialogue down as well.
On a personal note, I\'ve been trying to figure out for awhile now how I would go about writing a Unohana x Kenpachi fic and by reading your fic, you gave me an idea. Thankies for that! ^.^
Awaiting the Next Chapter,
~ Dark Saint
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. :) I wish Mayuri had more time to spend with his latest Quincy acquaintance, to keep investigating the smooth skin... >)
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic was great--I think the best part about it is I thought I\'d hate it going in, and ended up loving it. Your characters and their voices are utterly perfect; Mayuri was creepy, wrong, and delightful; and the reccuring them of \'names\' tied everything together nicely. Awesome.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You used Kenpachi very nicely. He\'s so rarily in character but you pulled him off good. Nice job.