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That was wonderful and hot. I loved it!

Nice story and a good Lemon but needs a lil work on detail other than that great writings hope to see an update from you or another story

Those things make me laugh too. A child-like sense of humor is always refreshing and besides...who wants to grow up anyway? As for your story, I was more than happy to find an Ichiruki that wasn't too graphic and or lude...not that's it's a bad thing, but it wasn't really what I was looking for. The fic had nice descriptions, I didn'treally find any spelling errors and the characters weren't OOC either. I was very pleased w/your first chapter...keep up the good work and I'm so grateful there are still good authors writing het...so much yoai and I'm not really a fan.

simply beautiful...not much else to be said.

Omg that was a great moment. I liked reading your fic, you're really a good writer. Just keep on making stories like this, they're just so fantastic >.<

Kinda fun

Good

Aawww!! That was ultra-cute!! I loved it!! My favorite part.....
\"Your wearing to much.\"
\"Well what are you going to do about it?\"
Aaahh!!I was laughing!! \'Cause it was so cute!!! Im going to tell my friend that....just to see what she\'ll say. Ha ha,well Keep writing and RAWK ON!!!

I must say, that was actually I Well written story! You actually stayed in character....and just *swoon*

I applaud you and thank you for saving my IchigoxRukia love....I was begining to think that everyone like IchigoxIshida which makes me sad.
Keep writing for I shall read! *dun dun duuuun!*

i was just passing by, seeing if there was some good lemon and i found this one! it\'s great! you captured their personality perfectly!
i wouldn\'t usually review but this was so good that i couldn\'t help myself! lol!