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for The Great Beyond

by Baqir

person Takerial
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An amazing introspective piece of writing, didn't expect to see something like this when I click this link. Good writer.
person Kamaitahci
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter is one of the best pieces of writing I have EVER seen and it made me cry which means it is an amazingly sad chapter. I think you are awesome. Poor Tatsuki-chan!!
WAAAA U ROCK
person Sakura-chan
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am simply awestruck by this amazing story that you have written!!
It is just fantastic...the emotions...the depth of feeling that the characters portrayed...the visual imagery...this story is definitely going to become one of my favourites, and I just want to say thank you for writing it!! XD
person Tryx
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s great !!! It\'s the first good story of ichigo and orihime !!! I hope you will do a sequel or just other good fanfic like that !!
person Bfpg1
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent story.
person Al
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending. I kind of wish for more but it was satisfying nonetheless. Good job.
person chidoriochibi
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi ^_^

Sugoi sugoi, I\'m so happy!! I\'m a IchixOri fan! Not many ppl write about this couple though ~_~ coz IchixRukia seems to be a more promising pair. I\'ve read the manga chp 199 and Orihime\'s feeling jealous becoz of Rukia. She\'s such a great person and she deserves to be happy. I\'ll support you till the end. So please update soon and can you email me if you\'ve update your story...aw I really want to click on the next button. You\'re the best!! Luv it and don\'t worry abt the OOC...coz you\'ve really portraited the character well.

Soshite, ganbatte kudasai ne,
mi-chan
person Al
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another really good chapter. It\'s really nice to not only finally see an Ichigo/Orihime story, but a well-written one at that. Lately I\'d swear the manga is headed towards that direction anyway, while Rukia is looking more and more like the surrogate older sister to Ichigo. But hey, maybe it\'s just wishful thinking on my part too. One thing I have to say is that even though that last bit there is something Orihime would probably say, as it fits her character, it sort of bothers me. I guess it\'s the one aspect of her that I don\'t like. She\'s almost too nice, and too selfless. Anyway, I eagerly look forward to the next part.
person Tryx
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT\'S SOO GOOD !! it\'s the first time I found a a good inoue ichigo, it\'s not that I don\'t like rukia but I prefer inoue ! Good Idea for ichigo to become a captain, he is just too strong ! I\'m sad that they didn\'t get a cute life in the human world, but your story is really good and you writte well !
person Amos
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!! An IchiOri fic! And a well written one, too!

So far, you\'ve done a great job. The characterization, although done well, seems kinda bleak, though... but that\'s just me, so don\'t worry about it!

The plot is rather original, yet very realistic. Actually, I\'ve imagined Orihime being in the 4th division \'cause it suited her abilities... ^^;

W00T!! Ichigo is 13th! Ichigo is 13th! XDD And he actually REMEMBERED someone\'s name!! <-- kidding