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person Zabimaru No Sato
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story you got there...but i would like to see more interaction within the characters!!...thats why i am writing this review to tell you that I WANT MORE!...a nice plot and great expression on the characters themselves..great job!!...i LOVE IT
person Zabimaru No Sato
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story you got there...but i would like to see more interaction within the characters!!...thats why i am writing this review to tell you that I WANT MORE!...a nice plot and great expression on the characters themselves..great job!!...i LOVE IT
person Zabimaru No Sato
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story you got there...but i would like to see more interaction within the characters!!...thats why i am writing this review to tell you that I WANT MORE!...a nice plot and great expression on the characters themselves..great job!!...i LOVE IT
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I, too, would like to see Nanao-chan showing her rough side. Great idea for a fic, and nicely written too.
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...very good beginnings, my friend, very good. Can\'t wait to see what else you come up with. Best of luck with the rest of it.

Additionally, I vote tiger.
person clas
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG MAKE HIM DO HINAMORI!!
person megan strife
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He can\'t just have sex with Nanao... he loves her! :P~

Well, let me see. I think he should do Soi. She\'s feisty but reserved. Like she has a stick glued up her ass. haha
person Sho-kun
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another awesome fic by you, Saint-san. You really are a very good author. One of the things that I absolutely loved about reading this was that it takes its time. Many fics rush the sex too much, yet you keep on describing what\'s going on. At first, I wasn\'t sure that I really like the first person point of view, but it kinda grew on me. I really liked the way that you characterized Rangiku, too. I hadn\'t really thought about her sexual side before and this kind of fits for her, I think. The only thing I felt off was Hisagi. He seems very sharp in the manga, but he is a little too clever in here. In a way, it feels like Gin or Aizen is more suited for the role than Hisagi, but then again, Hisagi is also a very undefined character. Anyway, I really enjoyed it and hope to see more of your works. And I vote for the Tiger. Growl!
person Hakushaku_Cain
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, with a very interesting concept ;) I like the idea of the choice of the next \'client\'
I would like to see a Hisagi-Soi Fong or Nanao pairing :)