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by kimper

schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a nice follow up :)
person Jimaine
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...new at lemony stuff...huh, never would off gused that was awsome!!! Seriously! SO yeah only critisisum is you definitly use some unusually words sometimes...well don't know as that's really a bad thing, and i can't for the life of me think of any examples damn it. Anyways awsome job! I don't know as there is much else you can do with this story but if you can please continue. It's really awsome!