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for Eight Hours One Night

by debbiechan

schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it =D It had almost all of my favourite pairings, too! <3 Keep it up~!
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. Keep up the good work I look forward to reading more.
person Camaro
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::Crams entire foot between Echo's asscheeks::

Don't you ever talk to debbiechan again like that you little jizz ball! Not if you want to keep that pathetic little pancake ass in tact BITCH!

:) There.. I feel better now.

Camaro
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rather good. I almost cried when I read the Byakuya Hisana...ahh....that one was my favorite. and the Gin Aizen was stunning....oh but i liked the Kon's little babble on how hard it was to be a plushie-you captured the characters well.
Love
Eddie
person true pervert
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa too cool

this was really good! esp. kon/urahara's manservant!
person echo
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol. you're dumb.
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was this the escapist porn you mentioned? Cause I liked it very much! ^___^ I like the whole idea of it actually with the inclusion of several pairings/characters. It had great pacing, and like everything you write, it's all so REAL. *applauds* You realize I'm going to d/l'ing manga now, right? XD

I almost LOL at that last one. From what i know about that character, it is just too amusing. Did I have a dream? XD Was she dreaming about the person dreaming of her? *grins*

Anywho, I'll shut up now. Great job. ^__^
person sem
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this because I totally enjoyed "Eleven Lovers."

I am slightly disappointed with this one although I'm not exactly sure why. "Eleven Lovers" didn't have as much sex, but it seemed to have more warmth and a natural, innate sexiness to it. This piece is technically good and there is ALOT more sex, it didn't seem as sexy or as engaging as "11 Lovers". The overall effect seems a bit cold, even detached and I'm wondering if that was the hidden theme.
person debbiechan
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sen! Thank you for reviewing. It's always a a treasure when people tell me what they DON'T like about a piece. I don't know about a "hidden theme" but masturbatory stuff was all over this one, and that's a lonely business. Gin was intentionally masturbatory--there was no dream of an attachment there. Maybe this one was so less sexy because people had little hope of romance in all cases. They are all Kon. :-D
person Cinnie
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Nemu-->Ishida one, I'm so pleased you liked my idea so much!

The Gin/Aizen was sexy-- always did like it when a guy works himself on the other fella, so that was hot-- and Byakuya's story was just steeped in the tragedy of it all. Wah.

Good job!