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by Vampircia

person AFF Reveiwer 374
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting
person jertuyq
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very OOC Ichigo and Rukia, but I love it. They will definitely be together, so you should write more. I think I saw you on Club Bleach before. Anyway Inoue and Ichigo doesn't even belong on the same planet.
person A Reader
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definatly nice. Some odd word choices, but still a good read. Seems to be more the first chapter in a story rather than a one shot, so I\'ll keep checking up on it.
person Kiara3XOX
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED IT......i HOPE YOU MAKE MORE STORIES....................pLEASE ^________^
person NUNICHAN
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was good, a little short and not very romantic but still good. I hope to read more het works from you. Specially if the ending is as funny as this one, I wonder what excuse is Ichigo going to come up with. Very nice.
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really nice, you schould continue it^^x
person suki
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! make more please!