rate_review Reviews

nicely done

I..you..wow, that's was AWESOME!!!! I LO~VED! Hitsugaya and Renji are my favorite charecters in Bleach and you putting them together in one story is like a dream come true! And Hinamori is really sweet, although I have to admit that I gladly would like to rip her a new one for her constant sighing of 'Aizen-sama'...makes me feel nauseous -_- And the she had the galls to ask Hitsu to save Aizen...grrr. But nevertheless I really liked your story and I hope you plan on doing a sequel. Maybe with Hitsugaya and Hina helping Renji in getting Byakuya...

Not bad. THe sex is hot! And I love Hitsugaya with Hinamori. Renji seems just slightly OOC, but you needed some sort of device to make the whole thing work.

that was...just..wow bit hard to folow in someplaces but...just..wow

Wow. Just, wow.

That was so perfect!!

This was really, really hot. The idea is a bit old, but very well executed, and I like the characters you used.

WOW! Talk about amazing, this most definetly was. Renji and Hitsugaya are my two favorites and Hina is cute too, and this was great. Perfect amount of uncertainty and sweetness and sexiness. Great job. You have a talent for threesomes I think. You should consider writing more of them. But seriously great job on this fic.

ohh that was soo cute! Renji's adorible lol. I wonder if they'll let him join them again hehe. It would be sad if they just tossed him out...but funny too. Anyways i wanna know what renji's plan is regarding Byakukya! Man that would be hot! hehehehehehe You shoul so write that, i don't think it would really be considered a suquel, but a companion peice. Anyways i just wanted to say i very much enjoyed this. So much so that i am already half way into the class i was wating to begin when i startedc this fic lol. Ooopp...why is there a gumby on the slide during one of my geology lectuers...huh...anywas, i also laughed alot. I love someone that can write humer in to their stuff and still have really good romance! You got them all so well, especialy matsumoro! I could actully see them really doing to him, that poor poor man. And ya know she'd be graben for things she wasn't 'sposued to when they were fitting him, the hussy. lol i wanna see that though hehe. they'd all be like wouldn't this go so much better if we did his hair up like this and he'd be like ohh hell no get your grubby woman hand's off'a my hair!!! ahh i smile just thinking about it so i shouldn't cuss if i bust out laughing in the middle of talking about earthquakes and volcanios people are gonna -really- think i'm weird lol. Anywyas please please please do the byakuya renji! Ahh soo cute! And i love you for this!!!

You naughty naughty girl! What are you doing to these sweet little virgins ;-) A very hot, fun piece. Yum!