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I like your story a lot and I'm really looking forward to reading the teenage version of Hitsugaya. It's a great idea to take a formidable shinigami and giving him growing pains! LOL! Nice to let Ichigo help him with understanding puberty. I think Keigo have to be a guest at the party, as he always seems to hang out with the group around Ichigo. Thanks for sharing this!

v. good, i like it. but there needs to be more action! oooooooOOoooooOOOOoo I HAVE A GREAT IDEA!!! HAVE A SCENE WERE HITSUGAYA GETS A BONER AND DOENST KNOW WHAT TO DO AND ICHIGO HAS TO SEXPLAIN, I MEAN EXPLAINE...(i honestly did not mean to type it like that but it works.) AND SHOW HIM OR SUMMIN!!!
im such a damn pervert...

This is such an entertaining story! Just imagining Hitsugaya going through puberty is hilarious! I can't wait for truth or dare. Please update soon!
P.S. The word used in the anime is 'taichou' not 'taishou'.

OMG IF YOU THINK OF A WAY TO ADD GIN, THAT WOULD BE AWESOME! i think ikkaku and yumichika would make things fun too. i love this story- it's so fresh and original. good job on it, though have you thought about getting a beta? your writing has quite a bit of grammar mistakes. anyway, i can't wait until the next chapter

Dont forget BYAKUYA PLEASE!!!!
really ichiXHitsu is simply cute!!!
hey how bout having them playing twister?!!
they'll get tangled up alright, in a good way too!!!

I don't think throwing Gin in there would be wise at all, if for no other reason that it would make things a mess. Finding a reason to have him there would really throw the plot way off track. Add Keigo, Ikkaku and Yumichika if you want to, but I think keeping it to what you have so far is good. You don't want to make things to complex trying to include everyone, especially if you are planning a truth or dare game.
Here are some dares I thought of: 1) Go the evening, or whatever the length of time it will be for the party, without using either of your hands [I had someone do that for a game once, surprisingly he did fairly well]; 2)person accepting the dare has to verbally degrade her/himself and verbally praise (to a ridiculous extent) the person who gave the dare, while also having to serve that person too
Truth is easier I think because you can ask for any type of secret or little-known fact about a person, for example: "what was it that you were blushing about the other night?" or if you want to get dirtier things like "are you a virgin?" "how many ways have you done it?" "male, female, both, and if both, at the same time?" Truth and dare games I played for the most part much more mild questions asked for 'truth's, but you can make it as sexual/embarassing as you want. Milder questions can include things like hobbies people may enjoy, like "how many times have you seen such-and-such a movie in the theater?" "ever steal or sneak in someplace without paying"
Wow, that was a lot longer than I intended. Rather rambling too, but oh well. Hope it can help in some way. I am anxious for more chapters. = )

Hey! Wow the story is awesome! Keep up the great work, i can't wait to see what happens next chapter PLEASE! keep writing! Je Ne! ^ ^

I like this story! I hope you keep updating!

Err.. I don't mean to sound rude or anything, and I don't know if anyone else has told you, but I think you mean taichou. Taishou, used in the name situation, would mean General or Admiral.... among seven other meanings depending on the kanji used. Otherwise I really like this story! I'm just disappointed in myself for taking so long to see if it updated. Please keep writing!

SPAM! Is something... "bad" gonna happen to Hitsugaya? ... XD *naughty thoughts* @_@

PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS COUPLE AND YOU WRITE SOO GOOD PLS update soon I`ll give you a cookie