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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good one.. glad i read it keep up the good work okay? okay!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! Your characterizations of both Ishida and Orihime were spot-on, and you still managed to get them in the sack without it being ridiculously weird. As smut, it was delicious, and they both were as silly and awkward as they should be as high school kids.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all...gotta say... I LOVE BLEACH.
Second, Camaro mentioned you write Bleach stories, and I was like YEAH! Gotta go look!
Chad is my favorite character so far, but I've only gotten to episode 11 just yet.
I love this story. I guess you're a mistress at the warm and fuzzy, huh? Very sweet, and very honest with the way things probably would have been. You took our powerful Quincy and turned him into the highschool boy that he truly is in the series. Just wonderful!
Keep it, Debbie-chan!
Second, Camaro mentioned you write Bleach stories, and I was like YEAH! Gotta go look!
Chad is my favorite character so far, but I've only gotten to episode 11 just yet.
I love this story. I guess you're a mistress at the warm and fuzzy, huh? Very sweet, and very honest with the way things probably would have been. You took our powerful Quincy and turned him into the highschool boy that he truly is in the series. Just wonderful!
Keep it, Debbie-chan!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! This was so effing sweet! You know, I'm not much into hetsex, hetlove or het anything, but there's something about this pairing that I simply adore, and you write them both so well! Me wants Uuryu to get his Hime! He deserves her. This was just yummyness all over the place. Thanks much for sharing.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ishida's custom zipper? BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! and... and... the quincey GIGGLING? OMFG! that is BRILLIANT!
bwaaaahaha! this is CRACK! how in teh world did you pen hawt sexy CRACK?! glasses, buttons, expert knowledge of clasps... this is so mindfukingly brilliant! but oooooohh... what an ending. *whine* poor ishida...
bwaaaahaha! this is CRACK! how in teh world did you pen hawt sexy CRACK?! glasses, buttons, expert knowledge of clasps... this is so mindfukingly brilliant! but oooooohh... what an ending. *whine* poor ishida...
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very good Deb. I really like how innocent they both are, and yet they know that there's much more pulling at them. I think thats the thrill of this story. i'm sorry that he lost his Quincy powers but something tells me that he'll make the right decisions. I hope your not ending it like this ^_~
MORE I WANT MORE.
MORE I WANT MORE.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! Ishida's nicknames for everyone... Kakate Girl, Lesbian Girl. XD
And his comments about discretion and not letting things progress any further... Ishida really is an adult in a teenage body, isn't he? I think they're perfect together. They balance each other very well.
I'm leaning toward him wanting his powers back, but you've made an excellent point about her impact in that decision. I can't wait to see how it all plays out.
And his comments about discretion and not letting things progress any further... Ishida really is an adult in a teenage body, isn't he? I think they're perfect together. They balance each other very well.
I'm leaning toward him wanting his powers back, but you've made an excellent point about her impact in that decision. I can't wait to see how it all plays out.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic. I love these two together. If you were on the fence about continuing this, I would definitely urge you to continue. This was realistic and wonderful. Great job.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squees happily* This is so good! I love how Orihime is so open about sex... it's so very like her! And poor Ishida, feeling so bad... I just want to hug him.
Also, this line made me about fall out of my chair: "They were going to make out like crazed weasels, weren’t they?" Hee! I love your writing style.
Also, this line made me about fall out of my chair: "They were going to make out like crazed weasels, weren’t they?" Hee! I love your writing style.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, woman! That was... Wow!
Ishida was in! - I can SO see him sitting there behind his book with a shit-eating grin on his face. :D
They were going to make out like crazed weasels. - That line had me giggling like a mad woman. XD
And the magazines!! I could just see Chizuru doing that!
*huggles Ishida* It's okay man. Just quit thinking so much and do what she asked. All will be well. ~__^
Ishida was in! - I can SO see him sitting there behind his book with a shit-eating grin on his face. :D
They were going to make out like crazed weasels. - That line had me giggling like a mad woman. XD
And the magazines!! I could just see Chizuru doing that!
*huggles Ishida* It's okay man. Just quit thinking so much and do what she asked. All will be well. ~__^