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for In Which Walls Speak

by sharingank

person Luna
schedule April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
omg that was great it made me laugh and get hot under the collar
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really surprised not to see one of my reviews on here, lol. I've been a fan of this oneshot for years. The formatting is all screwed up, probably due to the pre-site-overhaul coding and whatnot, but this story rocks. Hitsu/Matsu fics are one of the main reasons I visit the Bleach archives. The lemon is hott and rough and I love the dialogue b/w everyone. And despite the circumstances, I think you're pretty spot on with everyone without any OOCness.
I especially love the end with Toshiro's cocky response to Ikkaku's hilarious observation. Love, love, love (^_^). Sorry for taking so long to review. Hope to see more from you with this couple :)
person sisana
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was nice
person LaiaXI
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell, I love you for this fic. Immensely great sex, perfectly blended with humor and deep emotion. Best Hitsu/Matsu ever. Kudos to your skills, my friend.
person Solaris
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Juicy! This is one very juicy story.
Thank you for posting it and letting us read such a juicy story.
Will it have another chapter or is this it?
person Tsukashi
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"You bet your ass she was." OMG LMAO!!! A perfect ending to a hawt lemon.

Well written, great job!
person Kana
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are my hero. (l)
person chocolat
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. go shiro!
person yotit
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was totally awesome! you\'re my hero.
person Mr. Pointy
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Smutastic. The world needs more Rangiku/whoever lemons.