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for Love Without Motive

by debbiechan

schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"An army of good-looking fellows?"

I died when I read that. XDDD
I LOVE your characterization of Gin. LOVELOVELOVE it. And the idea of Ulquiorra on the bottom of a threesome between Aizen, Gin, and himself... I was floating in happy yaoi-fangirl-land.
person Boomanda
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was.....the best.....fanfiction.....i have....ever...read....please write more of these parings.....omgomgomgomgomg so awsome!

-Boomanda
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Swooon what a nice change of view :) We hardley ever get o see what's going on with Tosen (Or see him featured in fanfics le sigh, he's such a cool charecter, I mean C-MoN! There's so much one could do with him, especially with the situation of him, Aizen, and Gin [Truthfully, I really wanna see some more KempachiXTosen hehe] Really!!) I throughly enjoyed this fic and thank you so much for writing out of the box, Im so excited i HAVE to hurry up and finish some of my fanrts on Tosen and Kenny, now I kinda wanna do some Tosen Aizen Gins XDD! I'm not that far in the series though, so I dont know much about the Arcanna's besides there names and what they look like so yeah..Oh I do hope to see more from ya on these guys, and if noe, U did a great job on this :)!!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh I loved it!!!
(though i'm not much for Tousen) I liked the whole 'Ulquiorra/Gin/Aizen/Tousen' thing. It was hot. XD
I wouldn't mind seeing another one. ^_^
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After reading this over a dozen times, I figured that I should write a review.

Sensual.

That's the best word to describe this. Not pretty, not witty, not devious. Just sensual.

I find that the most erotic moment in the entire story is when Aizen corrects Gin on the moment he released. I moan out loud each time I read that single line, regardless of how embarrassing it is to make noise while surrounded by co-workers and family members.

I've read all of your works posted here and I cannot get enough of them. Your take on the arrancar and the entirety of Hueco Mundo makes me very happy. I'm biased due to my love for both Gin and Aizen but please, keep up the works concerning them. I would be eternally grateful to see something else devoted entirely to them, maybe from Gin's time as Aizen's fukutaichou? I write the same situation but it never seems to be as hot as yours.

-laughs-
person Mina
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing... that was... erg! And poor Tousen at the beginning XD;. Kind of like the awkward kid at school that everyone saw but ignored. And I can just imagine him just sitting around in secluded areas, or practicing with his sword... in secluded areas.
And after this... it's odd, but I can't see him initiating anything on his own. He felt so monk-like before and now he just feels one part vulnerable and one part in the know. I think he's vulnerable in that 'is this beauty?' kind of way and... and can you tell I've just been waiting for a fic like this -.-?

And Gin is a happy nut job as usual, and I loves him. And Aizen's... smart. Very much so. He could have just let Tousen brood himself into a puddle of anti-social goo, but he was like 'I'll let you in on the games, because if I don't you'll trust me even less than you already do and a trustless strong guy on my team isn't at all shiney :D'. And what cements loyalty better then sex, sad as it sounds XD;?
person Zazie
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Randomly, this line "Both men seemed to have hair that was very soft, very different from Tousen’s own"

Actually, if you look at volume 176, it seems like Tousens hair does hang down normally. It's kinda like Chads, it seems... though I guess he puts it into braids...because someone thought it'd be neat if he braided his hair...... thinking on that too, Aizen or Gin must have picked his uniform too. ...They could put him in a dress and I don't think he'd notice much out of the ordinary D:.
person Asana
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so hot!! (*q*) I never thought of Tousen that way...but ...after reading this story...
Please write more !! ;)
person zipperup
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love Gin and his comments to the projection in this. Those were just perfect~