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for Mad Scientist

by Vampircia

person Solaris
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That had to be a great day dream for him.
I really like this story.
Please write another one maybe on Urahara's POV.
person Beth
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe not to bad at all i'd like to see what happens next
person Zombie
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How old are you, twelve? Your grammar and spelling is the most pathetic thing I've ever seen, and your sex scene was completely laughable. "Private parts?" Good lord. Take a few college-level writing courses before you write again. Seriously. You suck.