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by sinistra

person beachlass
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story... I really liked the contrast between Orihime's babbling and the intense sex.
person bac
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've actually never even thought of these two as a couple, but DAMN, that was good. You managed to make Orihime very "Orihime-ish", loved the pillow babble! That was great, and I must say, I love Renji's tattoos too...
person Kiki Ortega
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just lovely. I loved every minute... er word of it. You wrote it out perfectly... and you're so creative. You captured both characters' personalities. You are great at this. Continue writing please...
person Fallensoul
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this.
It's nice to see a Bleach lemon that isn't M/M...
Kinda warm and fuzzy, and surprising Orihime seemed very IC.
Good work.
person Hochi
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG !

Soooo cuuuute X3 !
This is the first time I read a Renji/Hime fic and OMG, i LOVE them X3 !
You write them so like themself !
It was a pleasure to read tour fic, I really really hope you'll make some other fic of those two !

Biz X3
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I ADORE this pairing. You did such a wonderful job with these two characters. You kept them in character and let us see the needer, tender loving part of Renji I love it. And Hime was great too. This was playful, funny and sexy. A very good read:)
person Whiskas
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really really good =^.^=
person Inari
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've never seen anyone do Renji/Orihime, but that was great. >.> That was hot, wow. XD
And I do so love Orihime. Mebbe you'll do some more interesting Orihime pairings..? *hopeful*