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person Vyper
schedule April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a very nice story for a Mpreg. I would love to see more and I love Tomi, he is so cute. Hopefully you will write another in the future.
person GOTB
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww........the story ended and kinda at a cliffhanger to. What was up with the ending scence with Renji and Byakuya? Another child? Jeez. Scary. LOL
person lucrecia
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ichigo's father is Gai incarnate.

"I’m only showing our guest here how strong you were as a boy, Ichigo! Look how defiant your frown was! Look how angrily red your bottom glowed after my masterful hand worked its magic upon you!”

omg. Only Gai says things like that. lol
I laugh everytime I read this story.
person Mimori
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot. It was really fun 2 read. Keep on writing more stories ok, ur a good writer.
person Uchiha Yumi
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAH!!! WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!
Too bad it's finished, really - but I can understand you. :)

Keep up your wonderful writing

Yumi-chan
person serpia
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. I really enjoyed it.
person americanXminority
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it.
WOW, I frickin' LOVE IT.
This is absolutely adorable.
I laughed, giggled, smiled, etc while reading the entire fic.
Your writing is most awesome.
More, please.
:D
person Tonic
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writting this plot. I am very touched by the hard work you have put into it.
person Silver Wolf
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yey lol, another chapter!! It seems the aging of shinigami stops at some point. Maybe they prefer to stay that age, or maybe it's their personality or maturity in mind. XD Renji and Rukia obviously still look like late teens or simple younger adults, no one was too suspicious of them when they attended high school. Of course in the manga, the other students thought Renji was a bit weird cuz he had tattoos, lol.

I do hope to read more of this story. It's entertaining o.0. And such a lack of ByakuRen fanfiction nowadays.. ;_;...
person Uchiha Yumi
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEAAAAAAAAAL*

Oh my gawd! IT'S SO GREAT! I LOVE IT! ABSOLUTELY!

There's cuteness spraying all around! Gaaah! I'm usually not very fond of cuteness but it's really...too good!
I know...I know...I'm rambling, but you have to understand I woke up at my usually ungodly hour, came here and found this wonderful second chapter...I can't be coherent for all the tea in China *winks*

Can't wait for more! MORE!

Yumi-chan