AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Invisible Writing

by debbiechan

person Aoekae
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, but the last chapter confuzzled me. ^.^
person Kelocena
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Sh--! That was a good story. That was a really good ending. It was just all-round amazing. Probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read.
person Steph
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is, without a doubt, one of the best stories I have read in a long fucking time. Beautiful. The ending was perfect...sad, tragic, unfulfilled, but perfect. Excellent job.
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dun. Dun. Dun....

And the Purple Foot of God falls on the secret library. Great chapter hon. I love how you're tying the plot together so deliciously. Ishida's so cute. We all know that no matter how self-controlled a man is, he always has testosterone running through his body, and he'd never turn down the chance to bathe with a pretty, naked girl.

*laughs*

Lookin' forward to the next chapter.

Ja ne!
person ^_^
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looovely writing as always!

is it really weird that i scour ur chapters for hints of rukia? LOL

i guess i STILL am a huge fan of ichiruki

but hey@ ishida and orihime are progressing very well! XD
person Kelocena
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not gonna lie. That has to be like the meanest and most well done cliffhanger I've ever read. I swear, this fic is possibly even more intense than the real thing. Yay Bleach! Keep up the good work.
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah what a freaking cliffy I hope you can find it in yourself to give us another chapter of this awesome story to let us know how our heros do. I luv what you are doing with everyone's characters. You're just too good at the stories twists and turns. I love this.
person BrucesGirl
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting plot twist. I'm enjoying it to this point toroughly. I do like the build up of the relationship between Ishida and Orihime, and I'm begging to really adore the way you've characterized the Arrancar in your chapters. Aizen is quite the bastard, ne?

It's still a mystery to me what Ogihci is up to. He's a sneaky bastard, that Hollow. Another thing that I'm enjoying is Ichigo's subtle demands and kindness throughout the whole story. Regardless of how rough he is around the edges, he loves all of his friends, and he wouldn't be able to stand seeing them hurt.

Great job, Debs.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this story quite a bit... its creative and sensitive. Thank you for your work~!
person BrucesGirl
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't read this one yet, but I'm loving every minute of it.

It's wonderful.

The plot in it is solid, and you have me on the edge of my office chair (a dangerous thing, considering the bastard chair ROLLS. I love how you've developed the characters...especially Ichigo's character with the Hollow. I'm trying to get ahold of how EXACTLY to pronounce the Hollow's name. I know that the Kanji is a mirror opposite of Ichigo's name, so the syllables and stuff will be reversed. I'll let you know when I find it!

Anyway, I'm feeling you completely on all levels of this plot. I like how Aizen and Ichimaru has been incorporated into it. Just out of curiosity, has Tousen died at this point, or is he still around? He's one of my favorite characters from Bleach, and I was curious if he was leading the raids on Earth.

I'm looking forward to the next update!

Ja!