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by debbiechan

person 3Jane
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd marry your dialogue, because ... yeah.

SOgood. :)
person ^_^
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i realize this is an ishidaxorihime fic...but......cant help myself but love ichiruki coupling the best LOL

therefore i must say...

PLEASE OHHH PLEAAASE let ichigo come back and somehow meet up with rukia in the living world!!!
person Kelocena
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more, DAMMIT, MORE!!! You continue to portray these characters in excellence. Your writing style makes the story flow very well. Even if the idea for this fic wasn't yours, you write it so well, it seems as if it's your own. I look forward to the next installment. (More, I say!)
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was an AWESOME kiss! I love this, oh bless us with your citrus-y goodness!
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the quick update. Man this story is getting twisted and good, I really enjoy each addition.
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that you are having Ichigo 'use' his hollow persona to defet Azien. Very good plot twists and use of perspective.
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a fabulously rich writing style. This fic is a total gem.
person steph
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo...this just keeps getting better. MORE.
person Kelocena
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned I love this story? The dialogue flows really well. I'm awaiting your next update (and some IshiHime goodness)!
person Kelocena
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fanfic. I'm so glad you updated! I really want to know how everything will work out and I hope Hime-chan ends up with Ishida. Keep it up!