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by debbiechan

person Coffee Gyrl
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh what a cliff hanger I love how you are twisting this story plot around, very nice.
person steph
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Hollow Ichi love! This is so good...need more.
person tsukashi
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. I was hoping for some lemon early on in this, but I can be patient. heh
person Aoidragon
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo nice, keep it up!
person ^_^
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weird my previous review disappeared

anywho.

i'm not a huge fan of ishida/orihime but its a pretty darn good fic@ good job!

AND RUKIA IS KILLED?! NOOOO I LOVE ICHIRUKI! OHHH POOR RUKIAAAA!!!
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just luv what you are doing with this story. Thanks for the inner mindset of Ichigo, it helped establish character motives. And I love the lime:)
person steph
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is good. Very, very good. The short piece from the Hollow's POV was wonderfully heartbreaking. Please, please continue.
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOooo bath time! I'm really enjoying this story but what is the h-thing that Gin was refering too? I haven't seen any episodes past when they leave Soul Society.
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I'm not totaly up to snuff regarding the whole after SS thing, but you are filling in the blanks bueatifuly.
person steph
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hooo...getting interesting. I like this. Keep going please.