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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi there i really enjoyed reading your story, and can't what to find out what hapens next
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, how I love pervyness!! Exellent job xD.
Hehehe, Ichigo...
Hehehe, Ichigo...
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't mean to be rude, I critique this rather harshly.
There are alot of spelling errors, the most prominent being 'Itchigo' (which made me laugh, and alot of my friends did too), and there are a few words missing.
It would also be good to draw out a better outline for the story - maybe some people who don't even know what Tribal Wars is (like myself) may want to read the 'fic.
I hope you improve soon - this does seem like a very good story ^^
There are alot of spelling errors, the most prominent being 'Itchigo' (which made me laugh, and alot of my friends did too), and there are a few words missing.
It would also be good to draw out a better outline for the story - maybe some people who don't even know what Tribal Wars is (like myself) may want to read the 'fic.
I hope you improve soon - this does seem like a very good story ^^
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such an interesting story. I really enjoyed it so far.
And it's a Renji/Ichigo one too! :)
I really hope that you continue it soon! =^p^=
And it's a Renji/Ichigo one too! :)
I really hope that you continue it soon! =^p^=
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You do realize that there isn't a 'T' in ICHIGO's name, right?