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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot, only one suggestion; change thier eye colours...Byakuya's eyes aren't 'clear blue', they're more of a purple colour =3
Other than that, I loved it. <3
Other than that, I loved it. <3
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should so do a RenjixToushiro next! =O Hot story btw. ^^
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lucky hitsugaya.. XD
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, it was short, but short stories happen. It was direct and to the point, without much of a plot, but you told us it was a PWP from the beginning so that's also ok. The only real problem I have with it, despite Byakuya's OBVIOUS OOC-ness, is the description of their eyes. Since when was the Kuchiki heir 'clear blue eyed' and since when did Renji have chocolate brown eyes? Maybe you're just confused, but I'm more than certain that Byakuya's are that beautiful shade of midnight blue that's damn near black, which nearly match his hair and Renji's are a deep shade of auburn, nearly red, to match his hair as well? -wags finger- Details, hun. Details.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe that was downright hot! PWP smex is great! even though they were just "together," I thought they were both pretty much in character. please write more if you get the chance!