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for Bye Bye, Byakuya

by Brightside

schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do love dark fiction. I kind of wish he didn't have to die in the end though.
person Jenova
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was...interesting. A little cruel, but interesting. I wanted to know, if ever, will "fire and ice" be continued on another site and why it was discontinued. My friend and I were really enjoying it. :(
person Panko
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM

OMG!!! How fantastic! *nosebleed* I love Byakuya being tortured! Muahaha!
He's such a masochistic uke! I love him bottom. Torture him more!!
I really like this pairing.... so damn violent
Are you going to write more for this story!?? I hope you are!

rape him more!
person anonymous
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok. I have NO idea how your mind works. This is one of the cruelest fics I have ever read. Umm... well done? or... rather... think happy thoughts. :)
person Pervert
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow O . O Byakuya is WAY too pretty to be seme :3 so I totally loved this, plus I LOVE ukes in pain *nosebleed* you should definitely write more ^_^ THANK YOU! Thats was great, good writer too <3
person barara
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the rewrite makes more sense! ur a sadist when ur angry XD
person Tennak
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like the new version a little better. Mostly because of the ending, where you let Ichigo back in control so we know that he will do anything to save his lover, and because of the lighter tone (I know this sounds wrong!)of the Hollow finishing himself of inside Ichigo. This is not a story I would like to read often, but nicely done! Thanks for sharing!
person delonariel
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. I usually hate byakuya submissive, but somehow it's ok with ichigo, and you wrote it really well.

and remember that parents are often the worst judges when it comes to their kids.
person Nina nalman
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done!
person mon zero
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, another Hollow!Ichigo x Byaku-chan!XD So cruel but it's well written ^_^ Breathtaking, I can say ^o^ Good job! *LOVE*