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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh sh*t. Well done piece of fiction, wonderful descriptions. poor byakuya...but i guess that's what you've got to deal with when you've got a hollow and lover in one.
And up against his wifes shrine too. nice touch.
And up against his wifes shrine too. nice touch.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was harsh and yet I couldn't stop myself from reading it. Anyway, thanks for the lemon. Ja.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I admit that I rather enjoy well written Non-Con stories. I also enjoy your other fic, Fire and Ice. The appearance of "Hichigo" in Fire and Ice surprised me, but it turned out to be enjoyable nonetheless.
This fic though didn't manage to captivate my attention. I assume that it was written out of annoyance caused by a personal problem between you and your mom, am I correct? I read the story, but I just couldn't... feel it. The rape scene was not what I had expected. Personally I think that it would be much more devastating, calculating and brutal, should Ichigo's Hollow ever get his hands on Byakuya's sweet, royal behind. Maybe he would even take his sweet time to break the Kuchiki heir thoroughly, both mentally and physically, and it doesn't even have to look THAT ugly on the outside. Think of all the possibilities. Mmm.
Considering what I have read from you this far, I'd say that you have certain talents when it comes to writing. I also empathize with those to whom writing serves as some sort of relief. So as a personal advise, don't let your emotions cloud your mind this badly. :) You can always work more efficiently with a clear mind and your eyes wide open.
I hope I haven't offended you in any way by this feedback, as no affront was intended.
Have a nice day, Li
This fic though didn't manage to captivate my attention. I assume that it was written out of annoyance caused by a personal problem between you and your mom, am I correct? I read the story, but I just couldn't... feel it. The rape scene was not what I had expected. Personally I think that it would be much more devastating, calculating and brutal, should Ichigo's Hollow ever get his hands on Byakuya's sweet, royal behind. Maybe he would even take his sweet time to break the Kuchiki heir thoroughly, both mentally and physically, and it doesn't even have to look THAT ugly on the outside. Think of all the possibilities. Mmm.
Considering what I have read from you this far, I'd say that you have certain talents when it comes to writing. I also empathize with those to whom writing serves as some sort of relief. So as a personal advise, don't let your emotions cloud your mind this badly. :) You can always work more efficiently with a clear mind and your eyes wide open.
I hope I haven't offended you in any way by this feedback, as no affront was intended.
Have a nice day, Li
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kowai...
Demo, suit my liking for uke bya... ^^
Very twisted eh ^^
Thanks,
Setsuna
Demo, suit my liking for uke bya... ^^
Very twisted eh ^^
Thanks,
Setsuna
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kowai...
Demo, suit my liking for uke bya... ^^
Very twisted eh ^^
Thanks,
Setsuna
Demo, suit my liking for uke bya... ^^
Very twisted eh ^^
Thanks,
Setsuna