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by HellsingFreak

person Carola-chan
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean 'not a GOOD smut'?! I thougth it was VERY good! *drools* Some grammar errors here and there... But the smut makes up for it! Keep writing!

Oh! And thanks for reviewing 'Strawberry Bathtime' ^___^ I wanted to e-mail you, but your emai is hidden. Instead I found HichixIchi! *is happy*
E-mail me if you'd like to keep in touch! *hugs*
person Carola-chan
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok...so obviously my e-mail is also hidden...-_-;; kare_carma@hotmail.com ^.~
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The grammar can go fuck themselves for all I care...

Your story is HOT!!!

H!chigoxIchigo pairing need more lovin...
person Jade
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this couple. It does need more love! I think your story was good, but you did have some grammar issues. I like the descriptors you used to describe the two guys, but Boy still needs "the" before it. As does "teenager" and all your other descriptors that aren't names. But content wise it was hot. Good job and I hope you keep it up. I'd like to see more from you.