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Nicely done! That scene totally revved up my inner fujoshi, when they cut away and come back to Shuuhei just collapsed and Yumi's all sparkly. Smh it DOES scream 'edited sex-scene'

I love how you *ahem* filled in the gaps ;)

I love shuhei yumichika fix but hardly anyone writes them so thank you so much i loooooove this fic very hawt;) can you please write more shuhei yumichika fix that would be yaoi~fuckingtastic

Loved it! :D That must have been what happened :D

Oh my god...
I was laughing my ass off the entire time!!
Ahhhh so funny...and..arousing?!?
What's wrong with me... >.<

I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought of this when we saw that scene. The fact that the episode I watched subbed Shuhei muttering afterwards "that was dirty, you bastard" only served to fuel my simply beautiful mental images. You wrote this beautifully. Very, very sexy, and I hope I get to read more of your work in the future.

Holy God! That was awsome! That scene screamed sex scene at me too! I was tempted to write one but I never got around to it. Nice fanfic, keep up the good work!

lol You're right! That whole set-up did scream "edited sex-scene". X3

Loved it! =D

Yeah, well all had that thought, I bet. ^_^

Oh goddess that was just as good as Woolfwood's New Profession and just as hot maybe hot enough to burn out the flu bug we both got *sigh* this will teach us to go thru profiles to look for work more often

Affie and Rysh
who are happy to see more of your work

I know what you mean. I am firmly convinced that there is major impropriety going on behind the scenes in Bleach. My version of the Bleach plot:

Byakuya Kuchiki is sleeping with Renji Abarai.

Gin Ichimaru knows that they are sleeping together(and has evidence), and tells Byakuya so.

And of course, Byakuya Kuchiki would never want his reputation soiled by the fact that he is having shameful liaisons with his male assistant captain.

So, when Renji gets seriously injured, Byakuya puts him in prison.

Gin then makes sure Renji doesn't die.

And he blackmails Byakuya into killing Aizen.

Meanwhile, Gin has been having sex with Hitsugaya. (That pedophile.)

Who tells Momo.

Who tells Izuru.(Who doesn't believe her. Go figure.)

Byakuya overhears them talking.

And gets evidence that proves that Gin is being a pedophile. (Though exposing this would prob'ly get Hitsugaya in trouble too.)

Gin agrees to exchange evidence if Byakuya sleeps with him.

And Renji gets way jealous.

It would just make my day if I was right.