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for Somewhat Pretty

by Hellagoddess

schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God!!
I love it!! *-*

I thought the same about this situation! This scene in the Anime screamed for this Fic! XD
person Enya
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, so nice! I just adore Shuuhei... ^^
person Muffers
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, this was brilliant. Definitely what should have happened. I give you two thumbs up for awesome writing style and an equally awesome piece. Well done. <3
person Ales
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a dangerous Yumichika... ; ) An he is totally in character, great! I think that's a promising start for this couple, ne? ; )

Thank you for this fic! : )
person Tennak
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have just read and throughly enjoyed your version of the peacock vs 69! I felt is was a surprise pairing but loved it. I assume that Hisagi was completely hooked after this kind of treatment. LOL! Your smex was delicious and I thought that particular the peacock was soo much like T. Kube's version that it was spot on! A very satisfying read! A full round of applause for you. I will look into your other stories! Thanks!
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I know!

I was like,"O.O Did- he- but- I didn't- He couldn't- *insert smiling Pretty Boy with wierded out Zaraki here* HE DID!! HE CAN SMELL IT ON HIM! I KNOW IT! *panting Shuhei* *dies from a severe loss of blood from the nose*"
person Mali
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this one is great!
Your right! The way Hisagi is lying there just screamed sex-scene!
And your version of what happened was great.
person BrucesGirl
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
H-Holy Shit!

That was awesome! That was actually my favorite part of that whole arc where Yumichika dashed off and left poor Shuu-kun to gasp and moan on the rooftops in frustration. It was hot, ne?

Well, you have wonderful imagery, and you kept it light hearted and fun. It's very canon, and you developed the characters nicely. I like how the uke can be seme if he really wants to be. ^_^

Great job!
person Hiba
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great fic! I thought I was the only one who had seen that! (Have you gotten to the latter upisodes yet) Because even though the store owner is ugly, I really think Ganju and him have something going on....~Cuckles~ If you watch closely enough, bleach is just FILLED with Shounen Ai and Yaoi just waiting to burst out.
person samalexa
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story! I've never been able to find any shuuhei/yumi fanfics out there, even though I think they're a perfect pairing for yaoi esp after their fight :) Great job! Hope to read more stories from you!