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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've got a nice flow.
It gave me tingles! And I prefer ByaXRen, but this was pretty good! Too bad it was so short though!
Keep writing! ^__^
It gave me tingles! And I prefer ByaXRen, but this was pretty good! Too bad it was so short though!
Keep writing! ^__^
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you write. It flows nicely. You seemed to have a few past-tense/future-tense/present-tense errors, but the overall hotness of this fic makes up for it. Keep writing, you're good at it :D
BTW, I love how you portray the pairing... its so casual... i love it
BTW, I love how you portray the pairing... its so casual... i love it