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by Bitterchoco20

person Anonymous
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
English isn't your first language, is it?
person Uchiha Yumi
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there - Renji x Ichigo is not one of my favourite pairings, but this story was somewhat pleasant to read. The choice of situations and sentences is good, though grammar seems to be your weak spot - if you need a hand editing it, you can send me an e-mail.
I'd be very glad to help you - though I'm not a native English speaker, I've been studying it for quite a long time now.

Keep on writing!

Yumi-chan
person Uchiha Yumi
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Realized the e-mail doesn't show. lara_greco@libero.it in any case.