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for Too Little Too Late

by SnowyChan

schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can i just say ~I LOUV U~ ok this was owesome it was so different it want all happy and sappy, but gutsy and full of wickedness ~bows and waits for next chappie~
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw, such a prime opportunity for escape.. Overthrowing Yama-jiji? Why, I never..
person BeniHime
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so, since if guessed right i would like to have a very sweet urahara x hitsu pic. ^^

now on to the chapter. kill yamamoto. please. and aizen along with him and gin. another please from my side. they hurt chibi taichou! *turns into yachiru mode* revenge!
person Yakumo
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I really liked the Kira/Toushiro smut you slipped in there. Kira's such a sweetie. (Honestly! I love him so much..he just needs a hug.) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Mulle
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GOD
I love this fic!!!!
You are an evil bastard you know that.. You get back here and continue this wonderful piece of art!
I pray to some god that it's Grimmjow who found them, it would be much fun :P
And have Grimmjow molest Ichigo when Ichigo and Kisuke comes to Huego Mundo, that's always good :D
Write me a reply in the next chapter and I'll love you long time <3 xD.
person kuriqa
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ACK NO!!!!!!!! EVIL CLIFFY!!!!!!!!! ok ok ok... this story... has a totally wicked awesome/evil plot!!!!!! i love it ^^ and hate it at the same time... *sigh* but that's usual, loving and hating things at the same time... that's an interesting pairing for toushiro though ^^ kinda cute > < umm... i loved ichi-chan's reaction to yamamoto's decision ^^ that's pretty much how i'd've reacted... oh i feel sorry for little shiro-chan... although, mwa ha ha ha i didn't have to go through morning sickness when i was pregnant with my daughter > < lol... yeah i'm a licky bitch like that and as to izuru... i say it serves him right to have had to see toushiro get raped, yes he has redeemed himself to a point, but he is always going to have to live with the guilt that it's his fault that shiro-chan had to go through that. rape very much hurts, and not just physically it leaves scars where people can't see. what i am surprised about though is that toushiro hasn't threated the child to get gin to back the hell off, or that gin himself hasn't accidentally killed the baby when he's beating shiro-chan... the amount of shock he goes through can kill a child, espescially when in the first trimester... oh well.... i really really really really really really really can't wait for the next chapter and hope you update soon i'm looking forward to seeing the end of this all!!!!
person Racine
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
guesses it is most likely grimmjow...but who knows. I like this story it is interesting and definitely new. Poor baby dragon Toushiro...
person kristin
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, the story is very original and I admire your writing skills!
person shiro-lover
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE review soon.....I don't know how much longer I can take it
person shiro-lover
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE review soon.....I don't know how much longer I can take it