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for Too Little Too Late

by SnowyChan

person Shinigami-hime
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!!!! What happened???? Finish the damn thing! Is Gaya-chan's name cleared or not!!??? Does he escape unscathed and have his widdle baby???
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're so mean!!!!!!!!!

They should have killed him. Should have, but I can understand why you didn't have them do that. Gin needs to die sometime during this fic. I have yet to read a good fic where Ichimaru dies. Please?

*does an impatient dance* Hurry, please! Hurry!
person BeniHime
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes, you are horrible.

it was nice to read how he attacked gin and how kira knocked ichimaru out. XD

so, the attacker is probably grimmjow, since he is a cat hollow, and cats have a sensitive nose. not as sensetive as a dog, but still very fine.

the first to speak with the part that he heard something could be also grimmjow. the retort with the ear cleaning was yami, and that aizen wanted them present was ulquiorra. i hope that i am right.

and to the part in the meeting hall in soul society, yes! Go ichi! kick their butts! and Kisuke! Yes! he was so great! they will brake out. no matter what. Yamamoto-Soutaicho won't be able to hold them long. hope to read from you soon. keep going.
person BeniHime
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, i got the war thing wrong. it is already 11.22 p.m. but i will still try to find out who said what.

... ok, i won't find out, since i can't think straight and even if it wouldn't be this late i don't have a fucking clue. T-T
person Kalysia
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow, wow, wow. This is my first review, (I read it all at once. I couldn't stop reading, it is so good!), and, WOW. I love Urahara/Hitsugaya to death, and, you capture them so well. I am without words (how rare) to describe how wonderful this is! The story is wonderful, the plot is so intriguing, and... Jeepers, you are just a fantastic author. I am eagerly (and, patiently) awaiting the next chapter!

And! Since I thought that your challenge was a cute idea, I decided to toss out my guesses. ^.^. (Sorry if you wanted this sent in a different fashion. I do not see one, though. Sorry! ^^;.).

1. Shunsui 2. Matsumoto 3. Byakuya 4. Ichigo 5. Byakuya 6. Momo 7. Renji 8. Matsumoto 9. Renji 10. Shuuhei 11. Mayuri 12. Zaraki 13. Matsumoto 14. Zaraki 15. Ichigo 16. Zaraki 17. Jyuushiro
person aniay
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. I sspent few hours reading this story and I was like OMFG what the hell are you doing to poor litle Shiro-chan. And Kisuke x Toshirou ?! That is soo wicked ;] You had really great idea. I loved the chappy with Ichi/Hitsu but your other Hitsu pairings are awesome, however i dont like to much poor Shiro being raped and all that I will stick with this story. This is just to Interesting to miss.
And i totally Love Shiro being to-be-mummy. Don't hurt him to much please *makes big puppy eyes*

aand one thing that was annoying me to no end
NO PATIENTS but PATIENCE
person Berry-chan
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Save Shorty-chan and Emo-kun!!!

Die Gin, die!!! XO(which is German, of course, for 'The Gin, the!' XD)
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My guesses for the war rant is Mayuri Kurotsuchi, Jushiro Ukitake, and Renji Abarai. Go Kira and Toushiro!! I don't think they are going to get very far without Aizen finding out about them. Please Update soon!!!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD, SO NOT COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That asshole, I KNEW there was a reason I disliked him... Dammit, now I'm upset! T_T Poor Hitsugaya... I still say Uruhara busts in there and kicks some ass! *sits on floor dejectedly* Hurry and continue so I can rant some more. XD
person Tennak
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back dear writer-sama!
I'm so glad that poor pregnant Hitsugaya now has a chance of being saved (except for your cliffhanger)!
It is a good thing those hopping plot-bunnies have finnaly decided to line up for you!
I can't wait to see what they will inspire you to think up.
Thanks so much for sharing!