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for Too Little Too Late

by SnowyChan

person Yami Jay
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Ichimaru should be very afraid of me. Trust me. I think I'm as bas as Urahara on this one.

Anyway, I think it was a really HOT scene between Kira and Hitsugaya. I think I'm going to be nice and forgive Kira because he's actually helping Hitsugaya to past through this.
person Novz
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jesus! Well this is my first comment XD Ive been reading the entire thing ^.^;

If this was any longer I would have missed my bus o.o;.. Bad missing bus when I have a break soon XD And can't wait till schools out.. Senior Year whewt!

Anyways, I adore your story<3 I, like luperus, have a fear or MPreg. But.. its just so cute I cant help but read! XD

And.. that Kira/Hitsu action -drools- Keep writting! I look foreward to the next update :D!
person ficfan3484
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soul Society is slow to react, do they want Toushiro to be Heuco Mundo? Yay! Toushiro won't bleed as much with Kira so that's good. But will Urahara kill Kira along with Ichimaru? Toushiro looks so cute, I want to hug him, even if he'll be cranky. Update soon please.
person Luperus
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*glees* yey, KiraxHitsu ^^ and oh dear, morning sickness *pets before hiding*. Gin is still a git I see but that is why we all love him X3 and if I could draw Gin and Kira better I'd want to do fanart... alas, their hair has me throwing a fit x.x; lirl, I can only draw them in chibi and if that isn't a wrong image if I ever had one XD
person Novz
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay! I know youre thinking "What... two reviews?!" But I didnt get to finish my last one XD!

I love this chapter<3 and the last one... Though I hate the GinHitsu pairing you bring it to life and make me wanna read anyways XD

Youre doing a great job, I really love this story ^-^ I hope you continue soon but Ill try and be patient, hehe!
person sylus
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that this is one of the most well written fan fics i have ever read. i feel realy bad for toushiro chan, but... hes way to friggin cute for his own good. so i realy wanted to thank you for wrighting a realy good hitsugaya fanfic... there are so few of them out there.
-sylus
person Yami Jay
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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I bloody WANT TO KILL ICHIMARU!!! Now that we know Kira is not that evil, I wonder if he's gonna have a part in Toshiro's escape (if he escape).

I'll wait patiently for the next chapter.
person SPUG
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You updated thirty times in a row! Okay, not really, but hyperbole is my speciality. ^_~
So...I pretty much despise Gin about as much as anyone can...With the exception that I still love his face. If that makes any sense at all. This story is becoming my favorite Bleach fic. *nodnod* I'm addicted. And ready for fat pregger Hitsu!! Mwhaha! Oh, by the way, I'm also mad at Kira. What a bastard. He will suffer. Maybe. I'm not sure I don't write the fic. xD BUT, if I had my way, he's be suffering.
Keep writing teh ficness. I still lurv it. ^_~
person Luperus
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eppies, ohnoes, poor guys... though... Gin still does remain one of my mos loved characters XD interesting to know why he'll want the power though @_@;; tehee, and poor Kira, how will he redeem himself to poor Shiro-chan (if ever) will he try and help him escap and get punished? >>;;

Yea, a bit more sedate a review XD I can't remember the last time I slept ^^;
person ficfan3484
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Toushiro, Evil Ichimaru, Naive Kira. It's a good chapter, just really angsty. Update soon please.